• Published 29th Apr 2014
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Kingdom Hearts: Equestria Girls - Golden Flare



Sora and Donald arrive at Canterlot High to search for a magical disturbance by the order of King Mickey, But when they get there, they get more than they bargained for.

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[Alternate Ending] A Knight With Spiky Hair (Sority Shipping)

During The Fall Formal...

Everybody was dancing to the beat of Sora's CD within the gymnasium, celebrating the Fall Formal and the Elements of Harmony's victory over Sunset Shimmer. Sora was in the center of the crowd, dancing the night away, he deserved it after saving yet another world from the darkness. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw Rarity sneaking away from the party and decided to go after her, hearing the music fade in the background as he went through the halls.

(stop music)

Sora made it to the entrance of the school and saw Rarity standing in the middle of the courtyard by herself, staring at the moon. He walked over to stand right beside her and said, "Hey, Rares."

"Oh!" Rarity exclaimed, slightly surprised, "Sora! I did not hear you come out."

"I came to see if you're alright."

"Yes, I am, I just needed some air, that's all. Dancing can work up quite a sweat, you know."

The two lapsed into silence for a while, not needing to say anything, just watching the moon and enjoying each other's company. When the silence had become unbearable, Rarity chose to break it.

"Sora?"

"Hm?"

"Do you...like me?"

"What? Of course, I do!"

"No, no, no, dearie, I mean, do you like like me?"

The question caught Sora off guard; Rarity liked him for more than a friend? And she wants to know if he feels the same?

Rarity soon felt disheartened when he didn't answer right away, "...I see...I'll just be going."

Sora grasped her hands, "Wait!" He stammered, trying to think of something to say with his face as red as a tomato, "I...I didn't...I didn't say I didn't...I...uh..."

Rarity, with renewed hope, giggled at Sora's bashfulness, "So then, you admit to your affections towards me?"

"Uh...Y...Yeah?"

"Was that a question, darling?" She teased.

"N-No, I...I do, uh, like like you, R-Rarity."

Rarity smiled as she blushed, "You just made me the happiest girl in the world...my 'Knight with Spiky Hair'."

"Huh?"

"Well...I've always told the girls how I've waited for that special someone to sweep me off my feet and take me to a faraway land, where we would live happily ever after, just like in the fairy tales." She pauses, "I was told that life wasn't anything like that...but, your being here disproved what they all said, there are other worlds out there, and quite a few of them ARE fairy tales! I wish, I really wish I could go with you, to those other worlds, even your own, but I understand your reasons; protecting the world order and all."

"Yeah, me too," Sora said, "so, I'm your knight in shining armor?"

"Knight with Spiky Hair, darling," Rarity corrected, "you don't wear armor and your clothing isn't technically shining, but you're my knight, nonetheless."

Sora chuckled, "I guess I am."

Soon, the two embraced each other tightly, enjoying the warmth they give while basking in the moonlight. They loosened their hug and stared into each other's eyes as they sparkle from the glowing moon and shimmering stars above.

"So..." Sora began, "what now?"

"I suppose...we could take it one day at a time?" Rarity suggests.

"Yeah. That works."

"You will come back, right?"

"Of course! Even if we weren't a couple, I'd still come back to see all my friends."

Rarity smiles sweetly, "Has anybody ever told you that you're too nice for your own good?"

Sora's face scrunched up in concentration, "That's funny...I actually remember somebody saying that...though, in a way, it was behind my back."

Suddenly, they hear voices coming from the school's destroyed entrance, it was their friends exiting the school and saying their goodbyes to a certain lavender princess.

"We should probably say our goodbyes to Twilight and Spike," Sora suggests.

"Yes...and our own, as well?" Rarity asks with the telltale signs of watery eyes.

"Not 'goodbye'...'see you later', you mean."

"Oh," Rarity smiles once again, this time gratefully, "yes, of course, that's what I mean."

"So, when I come back, how about we hang out and get to know each other better?"

Rarity giggles, "It's a date."

Sora and Rarity walk towards their friends to bid Princess Twilight and Spike the Dog farewell, the two lovebirds mentally and emotionally preparing themselves for the next time they meet.

The Alternate End

Author's Note:

I know this one has a similar beginning to the SoraJack Alternate Ending, but I ran out of ideas.

Comments ( 47 )

Nice alternative ending keep up the good work.:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::yay:

This chapter was cute.

Far too nice for his own good?
Ah I see what you did there

i spotted a fair number of errors in this chapter, you better not be sacrificing quality just to get new chapters out:ajbemused:

6253429 Like what errors? I thought I got them all

6253798 here: "the silence has become unbearable, Rarity chose to break it." And here: "And she wants if he feels the same?" And here: " felt disheartened when he doesn't answer" and here: "you recuperate my affections?" Aaaannnnd here: "They loosen their hug and stared..." Here: "face scrunches up in..." And a few other ones continuing to the end of the chapter. They seem to be mostly errors with tense. You sometimes switch to a present tense verb when you originally started using past tense. Quick fixes, but better just to get right the first time, in my opinion:pinkiehappy:

6312671 You're not the only one. I always imagine of what's like in an actual video game of it.

6313219 I know, same thing. Golden Flare is truly a incredible storywriter.

6313219 if you liked this story you should read KH:PTS it's really good

6320299 Yeah... you pretty much on the money there.

6493214 Thought I'd test the waters with just Sora and Donald, plus, Riku is most likely continuing his training around this time in the actual games

Hello, Golden Flare,

I'm, Kye Rosario, sorry for the name. :ajsleepy:

I LOVE THIS STORY :rainbowkiss:, I can't get enough if it!

I hope you 'Reply'! PLEEAAASSE! :pinkiesad2:

6626674 I'm glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

I need to ask! :twilightsheepish: Are you going to make a 'Side Story' for this? :duck:

6628772 I have side stories planned for the future

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Question :duck:: In Kingdom Hearts 2 Final Mix has a Drive Form called 'Limit Form'?:pinkiehappy: I :heart: that form, so if sora use 'Ragnerok' and 'Ars Arcannum', does that mean he turn into 'Limit Form'?

You listen 'Villians of the Sort' from Kingdom Hearts? :trixieshiftright:

6629509 I didn't even think about that, I just wrote what I knew, I may have to edit that scene eventually

And yeah, I listen to Villains of the Sort, is there something wrong with that?

6626674 Glad you enjoy it. If you like it, try reading Kingdom Hearts Princess Twilight Sparkle

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I did and :rainbowdetermined2: it's amazing :raritystarry:, I can't wait what happens next, it gives me goosebumps' of exitment!!!!!:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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Well, I thought you might use it instead of Disquite, I have to know why is that? :duck:

dont be mad.:twilightoops: but its still :raritystarry: great either way, it's just an option/ idea!

6631518 I found it when I was scrolling around and thought I'd use it, and don't worry, I wasn't offended, I know you were just asking a question :twilightsmile:

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OOHHh?! :pinkiegasp: thanks. :twilightsmile: You don't need to change it, II-if you don't want to.

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So... which kingdom hearts series do you have and with one is your favorite! :pinkiehappy:

I played all of them and my favorite is 'Kingdom Hearts 2 Final Mix' and 'Kingdom Hearts 358/ 2Days'.

6631663 KH1, KH2, KHCoM, KHRe:CoM, and KH358/2D, and KH358/2D is my favorite :twilightsmile:

Plus, my brother and I don't have a lot of money, so getting the other games are a little difficult

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Wow :pinkiegasp:, the only one I don't have is KH Re: Coded! what do you think about KH Re:com? :duck:

6633481 Pretty awesome, I can use the entire Organization as cards instead of just a few! :pinkiehappy:

You are awesome. I read both the equestria girl story and princess twilight story. They're both awesome. I hope you do one of Rainbow Rocks. I've got a little idea. It's just an idea. What if Adagio Dazzle seduces Sora in one way or another? I don't know how or what situation, but it's just a suggestion. I'm not forcing you into anything.

Or wait, wait. What if Maleficent (and her Council of Evil) appeared in a new story you're going to make?

6778877 1. Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed them :twilightsmile: I do plan on doing KH:RR, just not yet, we're still planning everything out

2. Maybe

Alrightt, it's the same with me. I'm also still working on my next episode on fanfiction. But I'm also beginning with my first one on fimfiction. It's a working progress.

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6778966 Yeah, MAYBE... Stay tuned is all I'm saying... and not necessary (possibly) in the "normal" story.:raritywink:

This story is awesome!!:pinkiehappy: The secret ending made my day, now for the sequel.:yay:

P.D. I think SoraJack Alternate Ending is the cutest:heart:

6815230 Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

Great story love the whole thing. You did a great job.

Will there Kingdom Hearts Equestria Girls: Rainbow Rocks and Kingdom Hearts Equestria Girls: The Friendship Games?

I have one quick Request can you do me meeting Equestria Girls if you don't know what I look like I'll give you a picture, oh and can you make me a Dazzling too, for Rainbow Rocks? The Female Version of me has blue eyes, brown hair going down to my shoulders and I have clothes that says I hate (with a heart broken) in half Justin Bieber then I added the Yo. And on My Pants I put the words Grumpy Cat. So can you make me appear as a dazzling please?

I can't WAIT for Kingdom Hearts: Friendship Games!!! :pinkiehappy: My favourite Shadowbolt is Indigo Zap!! SO AWESOME!!! :rainbowdetermined2: Will Rarity be making Sora a sporty outfit for the game?

6887364 Sora, because of WHEN the Friendship games seem to take, won't BE in that story. Flare has stated that Riku will be the "Rep" for that story. But yes, I'm PRETTY sure Rarity WILL have an outfit for him.

7283039 Yep, Kingdom Hearts Princess Twilight Sparkle

Hey Guys if you like kingdom hearts then check this out

WARNING:
This video is awesome!!!!!!

Golden one of the dearly beloved music is unavailable in your story so I found different version of it.

Big Hero 6 confirmed in KH3

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Their battle stances are also similar, so.... 🤷

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