Just a typical university grad and part-time Librarian. Ain't nothing special about that.
HiE, MLP/40K*, One-Shot
Far above Equestria the Illustria enters its final hours; shattered and broken, the last remnants of its piecemeal crew are ferried to the uncharted world below. The shaken survivors of a void craft stumble out upon a new world while the garrison of a tiny frontier outpost look to the heavens.
*Not particularly Grim-Dark, it's just sci-fi.
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What's up with the loop?
I... I just don't understand. Try your hand at an original or at least try making a reiteration of this work. I would like to see what you did but for the life of me I got lost after the void-ship crashed.
i'm not familiar with this equipment from any of the codices, bro...
other than grammar, tis an interesting concept.
4093941 Loop as in linguistics? (the last word being a word just to tie in that it's a completely different language) Or just the general concept, or the symbols?
I am genuinely interested and, no matter what, I really do thank you and appreciate the time to leave a comment.
4093963 ah, it's just the burners on a side of a craft that helps them move in various directions when there's no air for wings or tail.
Many thanks though!
4093975 I looked at the beginning (Equestria segment) and the last bit after the letter and they are practically the same. Did the pony writing have a demented Daydream or something?
I am just procrastinating at writing Chapter 8 for Talvo's Fleet so yea anything to do other than that.
4093990
so you mean altitude thrusters? you need a proofreader...
4093998 Ah, yep it's just supposed to be saying 'things go on' as it flipped the roles some. Though the idea of a crazed daydream works surprisingly well too ~ponders that~
4094009
Would you proofread?
4094009 I could be wrong, but altitude is up and down, attitude can be left and right.
Proof reader is certainly a good idea though.
4094039
god, i love the internet sometimes...
if the author wants a proofreader, he'll find one, be it me or someone else
4094036
i would be registered in The Proofreader Group, but it seems like the group is somewhat defunct
4094064 Oo, wasn't actually sure they had a name for that too... in retrospect, why wouldn't they?
Post script: Tis now a vernier thruster as it should be! Again many thanks.
Wow... Wow this is just great.
4194462 Aww, thanks a ton mate
. I'm really glad to hear that. If there's anything particular good, bad, ugly or the like that's great as thoughts are always welcome 
That was good. I so want more.
Honestly I'm happy it didn't end in friendship, 40k is mentioned to be a warning, not a hopeful theme.