Each has had their own hardship to face. Each has an attachment they need to keep. And each has only one night left to make sure their feelings are known.
Twilight Sparkle is leaving for a year, to travel throughout the world and study with masters of magic scattered across Equestria. Spike, after an accident that put him in a strange position, has had to choose between his oldest friends, or the ones he's made over the years. Pinkie Pie is reacting more violently than any of her friends thought she would. And Rarity, all the while, is trying to deal with reemerging feelings that she thought she'd not needed.
With one night before Twilight's departure, the four try to make their last night together matter, each in their own way. And in the end, they will come out of it changed for the rest of their lives.
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My one shot at a one-shot (oh god the puns!). I hope this is as good as I want it to be, which is selfish, but that's what this is about.
I do not own My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, yada yada yada, etcetera etcetera. I think you get the point, so I'll stop wasting your time and let you move on to the story.
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Great story, I am very much expecting this to hit the top 5 in viewers very quickly. Has maybe a few spelling errors throughout, but not near enough to impact the reading. Well done!
I wouldn't mind the premise so much if Twilight's friends weren't so cold, unforgiving, and selfish as much as just lashing out because they were hurt, but their actions appear to be justified by the narrative. The problem is that the actions her friends take are horrible. It taints a good section of the story, which is more than slightly annoying, but ignoring that, you have a decent story.
......you evil evil genius and also bastard you write this amazing love felt sensual peace in very explicit details i might add but then you skip the actual act of love making! It goes without saying i loved it (don't get me wrong i still wanted the sex) everything flowed so well and when rarity made the beast statement and how it was curved i almost stoped right their and applauded, well played.
Im also quite impressed that you mananged to not only have pinkie and twilight but also rarity and spikes "events" going on at the same time without making the story feel weaker for it.
so again your a mad (and also evil) genius and i respect that
Oh yeah. This is a good one.
Every one-shot romantic fic should be somewhat like this. Damn I just had another feel about this story as I am commenting. 
Best part was Twi being punished. That's just gold. 
It was a good story. My only complaint is that the Appledash seemed a bit much. I mean, shipping's all well and good in a shipfic, but I think you got a little overzealous there at the end.
Great story. Ever thought of doing a sequel?
Wonderful, though a bit trite.
You awesome bastard thumbs up.
The story's pretty well written and i have to say that my only problem with it is that it sends the vibe that you can't have both a hobby you love and a pony(person). Really, the only thing I saw truely bad about Twilight's actions where that she didn't tell her friends until the last day and not asking/considering Spike's personal choise. Rainbow kinda shot her own argument in the foot when she goes and describes that she could get into the wonderbolts ect. ... what i'm trying to get to is kinda this "yes, i want to persue my dreams and learn more and better magic and you as my friends shouldn't be so agianst it. If RD did get into the WB we wouldn't demand that she stay here in ponyville instead of going off to cloudsdale now would we?" A large part of friendship is being supportive for your buddie's descisions and that just kinda got flipped upsidedown from the start. I think i'm rambling now so i'll just end it with this: This is a good story, when looking at the romance, but it all seemed sparked by an event that should never have been a point of conflict anyway. Yes various pony and dragon would be sad for various reasons if Twi had to take an extended trip, but the overly hostile and selfish manner they present said sadness seems excessive.
that ending was pure gold /)^3^(\
Pretty awesome story. I spent most of it getting pissed at Applejack, Dash, Fluttershy, and Pinkie because they were making Twilight feel like shit over something that was clearly important to her. They were acting like expanding her education, which is what she spends most of her time doing anyway, was a betrayal of their friendship. It was a little stupid and it annoyed me, but I suppose it works for the story.
The best part for me, though, was the way Rarity took control of the situation with Spike and completely and utterly dominated him with a vicious passion. In my opinion, the world would be an infinitely better place if more women were like that. Great job on both romance scenes.
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Nonono... overzealous is shipping all of the mane six. Or even all of ponyville. I think what NotARealPony did was actually rather impressive.
Fantastic job with both writing and the characterization in this story. It was both emotinal and heartfelt with both the couples in this fic.
Truly great work. Keep it up.
Great Story. Normally I'm not into Twilight and Pinkie Pie relationships, but this one was well done. Good job!
6/5
Wait, so did Rarity drug Spike or slip him something in his drink? Was that why she was angry with herself?
Nice cene from Rarity and Spike. It had, I say, passion.
This was AWESOME for a clop-lite narrative!!! Plenty of steam w/o the hot rocks!! The only thing I would have changed is that maybe it should have been a story with chapters with it, you know, have a chapter exclusive to Sparity, and another for TwiPie, then resolution, and possibly an AppleDash as well. The reason for the request in chapters would have been to extend the scenes, maybe some more explicit content--but after watching the thing, it would be unncessary for additional details. You narrated it beautifully, and thanks to seeing several other fics, I have a vivid picture of all that has happened--the passion, pain, joy, astonishment--all of it, both stated and implied (definite vividly of images for the implied scenes since the desciptions before the page breaks were top notch).
All in all, a great one-shot fic!
Ithis deserves 5 out of 5 Pinkies:
(always strive for improvement!! Never be complacent!!)
and 4 out of 5 Spikes:
I have to say... not to offend but ok I'll just say I so freaking loved the sparity of this story, it's just pure gold. Thank you, I really needed my sparity dose and wow you gave me a HUGE ONE xDDD
Though I agree with some of the comments, I actually loved this story, from the TwiPie, to the Sparity, and even the small bit of AppleDash. Great creative writing, Thumbs Up.
Fluttershy evolved into George Takei.
Oh my...
OH man, that first part of the fic
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Man that Sparity stuff was great though, so intense.
Since i dont normally read mare on mare related relationships in fics, that Twilight x Pinkie really took me by surprise.
This fic was great and hit many parts and was a joy until the end.
Good work
At first I was like this
But after reading a bit more I was like this
So much feels and so much sad. I like. This is much deserved.
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Fantastic. Why do I always feel guilty reading stories like these?
that's fucking great.
Good story, but I did not expect it to borderline that much. oh well still enjoy it.
Not a fan a this pinkie pie ship and frankly it to me by surprise. I was expecting something totally different for any of the Pinkie Pie parts.
However I did enjoy the Sparity parts complete and might read again later just on that.