… but he distinctly remembered Midnight sitting in his ward, sound asleep in an uncomfortable looking armchair. She had waited for him to regain consciousness, the doctor had told him. She didn’t leave his side for a minute.

Anyone think that's kind of awkward. Midnight never left his side while at the hospital, and Fleethoof is wearing a pendant with Cadance's butt mark on it.

And also we have the bromance between Fleethoof and Shining Armor fall apart. Not that it's not justifiable.

The adrenaline pumping through his veins mad whim feel sick to his stomach. He was losing control of himself.

I think you meant "made him feel..."

“I don’t believe you’ve met Minister Just Cause yet, have you?”

Having studied Just War Theory, I find minister's name amusing.

So Midnight had a thing going with her former commanding officer Commander Borealis. This has suddenly made things even more deliciously complicated.

This was just great. Moving on then to the final part of today's premiere.

4753007 I don't think so.... seeing as hints of her reason of joining the nightwatch as mentioned in "Everfree", I believe the commander is more of a relative and a close one, perhaps even her father figure growing up because her real one left her family. Saying "I love him/her" doesn't always mean the lover kind.