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Silent Strider


Compulsive reader, novice writer.

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Applejack's pie delivery route took her through the Flame Geyser Swamp and led to a faceoff against a chimera, but Big Mac's route to a mountain unicorn village might be worse.

Created for the Equestria Daily Writer's Training Grounds #011: "Somepony to Watch Over Me"

This story happens simultaneously with the episode Somepony to Watch Over Me

Feel free to point any flaws; it's why I'm taking part in the Writer's Training Grounds, after all.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 11 )

This was pretty good! Thanks for the story!

I personally loved it! It's going down it my top 10 one-shots.

Though, there were a few spelling mistakes, nothing too unfixable. So, all in all I give it;

9:moustache:/10:moustache:

CCC
CCC #3 · Mar 14th, 2014 · · · Home ·

Very nice. I enjoyed it.

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Thanks for your comments :twilightsheepish:

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Thanks, but... spelling?
I will have to take another (manual) look; Google Docs doesn't show any spelling errors, and the simpler and more strict browser one only shows the intentional mangling I've used to create Big Mac and Applejack's accent and the ponified words. There might be errors where the wrong word actually exist, tricking the spell checker, though.

Do you mean grammatical errors? I do tend to make a few of those, unfortunately.

Either way, if you point the errors I will fix them right away. Otherwise, I think I will do a couple more passes looking for errors, though I will likely wait a few days; doing a new pass too soon after the previous one tends to be wasted effort, as without some distance the mind tends to skip over the errors that were skipped the first time.

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... Can I add it to the 'Gem Hunters'?

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Well, the group seems nice enough, and you are one of the group's admins. Feel free to add it if you want :twilightsheepish:

this stuff's a gem!

(Jeopardy theam song) sequel. sequel. Sequelsequelsequel!

That was exciting. Interesting solution Big Mac thought up.

Oh, I like this!

👏👏👏👏👏 I really enjoyed this, and now ONWARDS

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