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Big Mac has set out to deliver the pie order. He's a stallion who can handle all types of beasts, creatures, and monsters, even more so than his sister Applejack. So why is he sent on the route that most ponies would consider peaceful, relaxing, and what many stallions would consider a dream come true? The answer has to do with three special ponies.

Written for EQD Writer's Training Grounds #011

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I liked this! Particularly, the boy about how Mac always took this path after the Nymphs brought AJ to trears.

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I know, right? Some stallions get all the mares... :twilightangry2:

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Yay. Glad you enjoyed it. I was trying to think of a reason why Big Mac would take the route that would clearly be easier for Applejack, and that's what I came up with. He's a very caring pony when it comes to his family, and I'm betting he'd do anything for either of his sisters.
Plus thinking of Big Mac struggling to deal with mares throwing themselves at him is just funny to me.
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Very nice story. Well written. (And I have Mac's problem. Believe me it's not all it's cracked up to be. :eeyup:)

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Grass is always greener I suppose...

Actually, in all honesty, if I did have Big Mac's problem, I would hate it too. I'd be so worried about hurting the other mares' feelings that I wouldn't be able to do anything.

4600384 Well...it does have perks. :ajsmug:

You should do another about the after effects if Big Mac actually takes them up on their offer and he becomes a husband to all three of them.

I would love to see Twilight's reaction about Big Mac banging the trio

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