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SolongStarbird


There is no such thing as normal. Everything is weird in its own way, especially me.

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Big Mac had the opportunity to take Applejack's delivery route through the Fire Swamps, but he decided against it. He keeps telling himself that he can face the exponentially greater threat on his route, but can he? He is definentley strong on the outside, but on the inside....

Written for the EQD Writer's training Ground #011

Art by DeviantArtist Rayne Feather

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 22 )

Nice story.

Crabapple's a bitch though.

I'll be honest.

I was expecting 'death by snu-snu'.

:|
JUST ONE MORE WORD.

Good story though.

4074195 Yeah. I tried not to make her too superficial. I kinda based her off of that one person we all know who hates us and never allows for a redemption.

The pacing was quick, but it works well for the story. I really felt for Big Mac even without any long monologues or outward breakdowns. Well done. :eeyup:

4074318
me too :trollestia:

Anyway, not a bad read.. but a bit rushed imo, but an okay read.

*also favorites this one*

Y'know, I've been wondering why this has been such a hot topic...:rainbowhuh:

4155021 It was a prompt for the Somepony to Watch Over Me Writer's training ground on EQD.

Okay, I didn't expect this! :rainbowlaugh: It surprised me in a good way, although it did seem a little bit too fast-paced.

4565809 Yeah, I wrote this for the writer's training grounds, and they only give you 5 days to write it. I would have loved to stretch it a bit, but I didn't exactly have all the time in the world.:twilightblush: Glad you liked it.

4565976
Oh, yeah, it must be hard to write a story in such a short amount of time.

4566293 You manage. I wrote The Best Policy in one day, and it turned out fine.

4567594
Oh, really? I'm gonna go check that out.

It's a fair story. Personally, I would have done a bit more with it (flesh it out more), but not too bad. :eeyup:

4611462 Yeah, I know. It was for the WTG, so I had like 3 days or so to write it....

4611496 Not trying to imply anything, :rainbowderp: I'm just saying.

4611508 Don't worry. You are fine. I am just giving you a reason for why it is a bit fast paced.

Yup. I had relatives like that. Not pleasant at all.

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