• Published 27th Mar 2012
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Rocket To Insanity : Fall Of The Apple Family - DontWakeTheNeighbour



Rainbow Dash continues to fight her loosing battle and Applejack begins to see that something is up.

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The end and a beginning

It was midnight. The moon rose from the horizon and shined it's light across Equestria, giving a surreal glow to the country. Almost everypony was asleep, that is, except for a certain three ponies and a certain dragon, who quietly emerged from the large stone castle. All three were packed and ready to embark on their most dangerous quest yet. Twilight, Fluttershy, Rarity and Spike walked down the large stone path before the purple mare stopped to look back at the castle one last time.

"Twilight?" Spike called. "Are you okay?"

"Yeah.... it's just. .... I never thought it would come to this, but there is no other way." Twilight turned to face her friends. "I'm so sorry I got you into this."

"Twilight." Rarity started. "What you're doing is the right thing, and, for once, I can say, with all my heart, that what you're saying makes sense."

Fluttershy walked foward. "Rainbow Dash is the element of loyalty. She showed us to never give up on our friends. She was always there for everypony."

"And it's time we did the same for her." replied Rarity.

Twilight smiled before shedding a tear. She looked up to see the purple dragon in front of her, holding a napkin. Spike wiped her cheek before Twilight walked foward.

"Spike. Do you still have paper and a quill?"

"Never leave the library without them." Spike said as he pulled out the parchment.

"Dear Princess Celestia.
Today I realised that sometimes the choices we are given are not always fair. Sometimes they can test your loyalty and show the kind of pony you really are. I am sending you this letter because this will be the last time I'll be able make contact with you before I cast cloaking spell, preventing you from finding us. By the time this letter reaches you we will be far from home and one step closer to finding and helping our friend. I'm aware of the laws we are breaking and what our sentences will be, which is why I'm writing this letter as a final goodbye and as a thank you, a thank you for everything you've done to shape me into the mare I am today.
Your faithful student resigning.
Twilight Sparkle."

Spike finished the letter but, before he could send it, Twilight used her magic to snatch it from his hands.

"Okay everypony, I'm going to make this clear. Once we do this, we can never go back. If you choose not to go I will not hold it against you. I will completely understand."

It didn't take long for Rarity, Fluttershy and Spike to step towards the purple unicorn with pride strong in their hearts. Twilight nodded at Spike, before he blew his fiery breath to send the letter on it's way. They all set off into the horizon, not knowing what was coming or if they would ever come back.

To be continued.

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Comments ( 50 )

Ahm sho shad wight naw :applecry:

To be continued.
These are the three words i dread most when getting involved in a story.
But overall a very good story.:pinkiehappy:

is this the first Rocket to insanity i wanna read ALL the stories

457368 this is a sequel to the origonal Rocket to insanity :)

462286 Google docs. Just type "Rocket To Insanity" you should get it.

534410 This is a sequel to the origonal rocket to insanity story.

585508 For me there are 3 levels of insanity, crazy being the first stage, insane being second, Bat shit insane is the third stage

Caught that my little dashie reference in the letter.:rainbowderp:

Have I ever mentioned that this is the story that led me to this site?

I.. Am... Very very scared to read this especially before night for dash will get me uhhhhhh fuck I'm just getting out of here :rainbowkiss: oh shit fuck fuck ahhhhhhhhh! :rainbowdetermined2:

:pinkiegasp: 1. I read this story in ONE day!
2. I need to find out what happens NEXT!!:flutterrage:
the remaining elements....:yay: :raritystarry::twilightsmile:

865067 i suppose what comes around goes around yes?

WHAT! WHAT! WHAAAAAAAAAT!
To be continued? TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!?
HOW DARE YOU:flutterrage:
Please, please write the sequel! FAST!!!

Dawn of a dying Pegasus. Fuck yeah. :flutterrage:

620673

I think i might in the first stage.:pinkiecrazy:

1104447 Finally read it...
And damn, that was one hell of a first-time story :pinkiehappy:

620673 And guess what?
I be on the 2nd or 3rd level :pinkiecrazy:
Thing is, I don't go around killing people, I drive them insane by forcing them to look at stuff like dis when they get scared of watching Cupcakes :pinkiecrazy:
That, or someone is in my head like Dash's :ajsleepy:

1255546 Surely smiling whilst writing it is even worse.

1257646 What about grinning and having unusual satisfaction at the amount of death, whilst listening to some F.E.A.R 1 OST whilst reading the whole of the original and this? :pinkiecrazy:

620673 Well...I'd guess, judging from the fact that I've noticed that I have bloodshot eyes, and what I said above well..probably very slowly edging closer to 3

What about grinning and having unusual satisfaction at the amount of death? :pinkiecrazy:

My goodness, you wouldn't even believe... :pinkiecrazy:

1257646
Actually, talking to me, that sounds quite normal :pinkiecrazy:

Epic story!

ON TO THE NEXT ONE! :pinkiecrazy:

What laws are they breaking exactly? I'm pretty sure it's not illegal to try track down a serial killer. Helping her stay hidden after they find her would be, but until that happens they wouldn't have done anything wrong.

Dear Twilight,
You have learned many things but yo rachet ass ain't resigning till I say so bitch.
Your teacher who doesn't give a shit,
Princess Celestia:trollestia:
P.S If your reading this then I know that you have a unhealthy obsession with me Twilight:trollestia:

2350117 I just love your name XD :rainbowlaugh: :pinkiehappy:

and i thought i was nuts but damn was that sad poor scoots poor poor scoots :raritycry::fluttercry::applecry::ajsleepy::pinkiesad2:

I have been waiting forever for this to be finished! I beg of you, Dont make me wait any longer! :raritycry:

It... just... that's ppreeettttyy fucked up. Just...:ajbemused:

I was kind of fearful about reading all this Rocket to Insanity series. I was thinking it was gonna be something like Sweet Apple Massacre where it wasn't really scary but more very disturbing so I kept putting it off. Im very pleasantly surprised that I was wrong and it wasn't very bad at all! I really like this story a lot! Keep up the good work while im off to read the next part of the series

Im assuming the CMC also moved to Canterlot? Applebloom with nobody but Granny Smith left. Sweetie could easily be a target still so it might not be safe to be with her parents (if they do in fact life in Ponyville). Scoots defiantly still a possible target

BTW its still technically the 'Fall of the Apple family' if GS and AB are still alive. not tot mention all there relatives

Mind posting a link please (I'm lazy)

I have the best betral story idea! what about Gilda? :pinkiecrazy: Think about it I sound ;like a person who is into this don't I? :facehoof: oh well :derpyderp2:

Is this the first one in the Rocket to Insanity Series?

3302113 Not to pry on the subject but if you look at the picture for this fanfic it says sequel to Rocket To Insanity by StickMaster5000.

3353288 reads comment, looks at picture :rainbowderp: you win this time observant people!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage: seriously tho i dident see that thanks

3299344 no, this is the second one.
The first one is just plain "Rocket To Insanity"

4023762 It's not there. Is it by this author? Give the link to the first one, please. Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

the link on the Creepypasta Wikia won't work, it would work better just too look it up.

Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooo

4487190
Considering how long ago I had made that comment, I already have, and many others.

Shit just got real

Blagh... This story had more grammatical errors then a One Direction fanfic posted on Wattpad... The fighting was boring and predictable, the mental SNAP was rushed to no ends, the constant repeat of the same exact lines was immense to say the least "a tear rolled down her cheek" repeat X25 times and that is 99% of the "EMOTIONAL" scenes, the ending was awful, and Rarity goes one second from "SHES AN MONSTER AN NOT FRIEND" to "WE AN MUST SAVE OUR FREND" and my god!! caps lock does not equal emotions! JUST BECAUSE I TYPE LIKE THIS!! DOESN'T MEAN IT GIVES EMOTIONAL CONTEXT TO MY WORDS!!..

This comment is not biased against "Serial Killer" "OOC Gorey" or any form of "DEATH" in Equestria, those are actually my favorite kind of stories, this one however was terrible.

apologies for such a negative and some what mean review, I'm merely speaking my mind and judging something I don't like.

These Sequels are got me into the mlp grimdark community though i can the flaws in this story its still a story i can go back and read so good job Don'twaketheneighbuor.

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