• Member Since 25th Mar, 2012
  • offline last seen Oct 6th, 2012

ponyphoney


Comments ( 5 )

Interesting.... This could be done quite well... tracking for now.

Hm. Kinda seemed to go a bit fast at the end there, and I wasn't entirely sure who was talking. (Jacob, or Twilight with a random accent?)

It could be interesting, I will track.



~Jack

Yeah...sorry about the end. I will edit it in the future, I was just tired when I was writing the last part.

A little fast and quite a lot of grammar errors, but I'm a sucker for stories like this. I'll be tracking.

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Well, it is my first story, and I was so excited to upload that i did a quick skim as my final check :rainbowlaugh:

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