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jxz


an amateur writter and brony(with a hint of otaku here and there.)

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A snip I made for a contest a few years ago.

Lyra wants hands, but she will find something else along the way... More exactly, that magic is unpredictable.

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Yeah, you had a few grammar errors in it that are easily fixable. But it was a good story, and I guess it was a little fast paced. But the read was good.

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