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Doctor Parker


I am the Doctor, the Rebel of FiMFiction, and I'm here for the food. We should love and tolerate everyone, not just the people we agree with. If you have a problem with that, that's too bad.

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November 4, 1954:

Godzilla has been killed by the Oxygen Destroyer. His spirit is now in the Underworld, but urged on by a mysterious "Destroyer of Worlds", he learns that a realm of Light derived from the virtues of humans lies just about the surface, he is about to make a gambit with the Lady of the Dead, Izanami. Hoping to get revenge on the humans, he wins the bet, and so he is granted access to this fabled Land of Light, looking for a new body to possess, and he has found just the target...

Written in the same vein as the earliest Showa Entries, this is a highly character-driven tragedy.

Cover Art by Mr. Nuke

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 59 )

A few years back, during Christmas time, Target had commercial that went like this: a woman checks the mail, and finds a catalogue for Target. She begins sobbing, and screams "IT'S HERE! IT'S HEEEEEERE!!!!!"
That's how I felt when I saw this was posted.

...
What.
WHAT.
WHAT!!!
This...
WHAT?!?
(And I've only read the summary so far...)

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Give it time; it gets a little good towards the end of "Trouble Brewing". :raritywink:

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A gentle two-legger, Godzilla thought. I like him.

This line.
Wow.
I LOVE the original Godzilla, so I was completely aware of the context and just WOW.
The sad irony of this line makes me want to both laugh and cry.
The idea that in his last moments of life, Godzilla thought highly of Serizawa is just mindblowingly perfect on so many levels.
Even if the rest of this story is awful, I will be pleased I read it just for that line.
You've earned yourself a fave.
Also, you might want to add this to a couple of groups so it gets more attention!

I rather like where this is going. The emotional development is quite superb.

:pinkiegasp: He looks like the goddamn devil! Spoilers
:raritywink:
Totally called it.

Spike, you don goofed up.:facehoof:
Anywho, DIS GON B GUD.

This is like the fifth fic in a row that I read that has a very interesting plot, but that decides to turn Spike into a horny dog for some reason.
I'll keep reading because I want to see how this story develops. I just hope you don't let sex be the center of the story or have any big impact on it.

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I'm basing him on when I was an adolescent; Rarity's overreactions plus Spike's over-drooling are part of what makes him feel inadequate. Several things that make him feel inadequate make him vulnerable for an unpleasant form of domination by Godzilla.

As a youth, I felt inadequate, due to several things. Me not being able to win the heart of a girl I lusted for was one of them.

But no, Spike's not going to have sex, he'll want it, but he won't have it. It's his sensation of inadequacy that drives the story.

4132866 It's okay. I guess I misunderstood Spike's motivation.

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No, you got it right; he probably hopes Rarity wants the D at worst, and is content to look at her wrong at best.

It's just that it's not going to happen, and when it doesn't, he'll blame himself even though he's barely pubescent and Rarity is in her early 20s, and even if he didn't f*** up, he never would have got the chance and hardly needs to blame himself. But he will anyway, and that will make him feel inadequate, never mind all his other good qualities, he'll just see himself as a failure.

Welp, buck this!! you just put yourself in a firing line pal, good luck.

Ok, didn't expect this.
Just one thing, Rarity is used to seduce guys to do her biding and she throws a scandal on Spike for merelt looking at her (sure, he shouldn't have done it and I agree100 percert with Twilight about relationships). So it means Rarity throws a scandal on a weekly basis?

4142013
That's a good point, though a lot of girls who act like they want to be seduced throw a scandal when they get what they seem to ask for, in my experience.

4141943
How come?

Oh, I know it's different, but if it's well-written enough, different can be good.

I don't expect the majority to hate this based on it disturbing head-canons, I expect just some tips on making it better-written.

4142013 I agree dude. While Spike shouldn't have looked it is a bit much to throw him through the door.

On another note I did not see that coming.:rainbowderp:

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That's kind of the idea; in fact, part of the reason why I even show a shred of sympathy to Rarity is mostly only because everybody's pitiable and it would have offended many not to do so. Rarity, like many other females like her, always goes too far, and I think that she was too hard on Spike.

Wow that is original. I can't wait for the next chapter. Best of luck

4142511 Twilight is his mom, i will accept that, but birth mom, no!! Twilight got spikeb when she was a kid, you are suggesting now that dragons age the same as ponies for when they are young then age slower the older they get by doing this, you have messed up.

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It provide an opportunity for greater build-up of Spike sense of inadequacy, making him more vulnerable in the upcoming events. Plus, it's a fanfic, so things could be retconned, and other things would be considered lies (such as Twilight hatching Spike being implied to be a lie).

However, the fact that it's just so weird and just so different, I can actually accept almost as a fault anyway. It's almost too weird and different.

*prepares self for insane feels storm next chapter*

4144811 Then that would mean some one would have to have implanted those memories or else it would never have added up for him, cause even from a young age, you can still remember some things.

This story is one of my four current masterpieces, so I will treat it as such.

Which begs the question; should I alter the ending of Chapter 2 slightly so that Twilight isn't the birth mother, but clumsily tries to make Spike call her Mommy? Or is it good enough the way it is?

I can't publish Chapter 3 until I know how Chapter 2 ends, but either way, there should be the feels storm you asked for soon.

....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................wat?

Ouch. Poor Gozilla.a:fluttershysad:

*reads part about Scootaloo's dad*
....mustn't.....cry...until...the...end....*scrubs at eyes*

And so the plot thikens. Great chaptrr.

I really do like where you're going with this story. But there were a few things that rubbed me the wrong way.You really should have established that Godzilla's powers don't work in the previous chapter. It really felt like it came our of no where here. Also, AppleBloom's crush on Spike feels forced and like you threw it in at the last second. I don't mind SpikeBloom, but this isn't really a good way to introduce any ship. As for your author's note, were Dash's parents established? Aside from the cameo in that first Equestria Games episode, I can't remember a single instance where they were even mentioned.
Still, I like the drama of the Twilight revelation, and I think this can go places.

Wow. I wonder what is going to help change Spikes mind. Good chapter. Best of luck with the next one.

If... you were supposed to be treating him like a son, Twilight... Well if the show is still mostly canon, you don't do a very good job most of the time.

He seems like a cross between a pet and an employee back in first season. I guess it could be part of the employer-not-family charade for her new friends, but if so, she's taking it a bit far. That, combined with how he must feel like he doesn't fit in at all with... not going to normal school, being told he doesn't have a family, clearly spending most of his time working instead of playing like most foals... I figure that's a pretty strong reason why he can't feel like she's his mother, not just her not telling him it until he's a fair bit old.

I have to agree with Spike, if you by canon Twilight isn't the best parent. Well, Godzilla was never one for plans but he should have thought that one out better. It looks like Godzilla will have bribe with death herself.

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Well, the Underworld is divided into multiple chambers, each with different limitations. Godzilla broke out of his stasis chamber, and is now in the "hall" which leads to all the other cells. Still, I should have had some kind of build-up.

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You know, you actually have a good point, though fortunately the solution to that is a simple one; I don't even have to alter the chapter that much, Applejack will later just hear Twilight's mutterings about what happened, and then she will explain to Twilight that Spike had a bit of a point: It's never too late or too soon to tell anypony the sort of thing Twilight told Spike, but it seems that Twilight never knows the right times to actually be a maternal figure to Spike. In short, it's not about the cold knowledge or the warm feelings inside, which is what Twilight's all about, but what you do and how you act on that sort of thing. Twilight has a heart almost as pure as Fluttershy's or Pinkie Pie's, and is also every bit as intelligent as those two if not slightly more, but she never takes out her logical thoughts and loving emotions out correctly when it's something she's nervous about. I can cover all of this next chapter.

I like the fact that you made twilight spike birth mother very original:twilightsmile:

ATTENTION ATTENTION ALL FANS OF THE KING ATTENTION I JUST CAME BACK FROM GODZILLA (2014)...IT WAS A MASTERPIECE A ONCE IN A LIFETIME WORK OF CINEMATIC GENIUS I IMPLORE ALL THOSE WHO KNOW THE GAME OF HIS EXCELLENCY GODZILLA TO SEE IT IMMEDIATELY

"Yes Spike...I really am your birth-mother."

Just... no.

You can use your headcanon to fill in gaps in the show's story or add new content, but here you're blatantly contradicting things we've already seen happen. That's not how it works.

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With all due respect, the "told" past of MLP can be a lie, and this is Fanfiction; I can do whatever I want with it.

I partly got the idea from this:
i.imgur.com/Zaid2aw.png

4420654
You really should do something about Twilight's age, though. Because otherwise she laid an egg(???) bigger than she was, and it also means she had fun with a dragon when she was a little filly.

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Well, that's actually not a bad catch, but I don't buy EQG's claim that she's an adolescent. Why she'd tell the CMC that she was a little foal who adopted an egg, I know not, probably to protect herself and Spike. Kids don't exactly keep secrets, I should know because I was one not too long ago.

Why the sudden interest in my work though? :trixieshiftright:

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Why the sudden interest in my work though?

I was doing research for about an hour on how filly Twilight got impregnated by a full-size dragon while talking to somebadauthor, my searches on Derpibooru were limited.

That's probably why she had some sudden interest in the fic.

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Ah, I see.

Well, now you know...because she wasn't really a filly when it happened. She was the pony equivalent of a human 18-year-old when it happened, most likely.

But what did you come across to make you interested in the subject? :trixieshiftright:

Have you been studying me again? :applejackunsure:

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I see you around the site, can I not read your fics? Once I release my fic I am sure everyone that knows me will jump on it.

Anyways you definitely have grammar down, I will say that.

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