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dirty little secret


I tried so far… and got so hard… but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (Direct Support)

Comments ( 61 )

I love gaping cum dripping assholes :rainbowwild:

4050634
That's one for the quote book! :twilightsmile:

Okay why is this in the Twiluna Group?:rainbowhuh: let alone Twilunestia?

4052586
Huh? Did I make an oops?

Sorry, I didn't mean to put it in that group. :twilightoops:

4052590 Just lettin ya know.:twilightsmile:

I say the Mane six are Bi! :scootangel:

there's already a fic on this site with this cover iamge.....

4053299
:rainbowkiss:

4053672
Well, I don't know about all of them, but yeah.

4054333
:rainbowlaugh:

4055319
Figured there would be.
But it just fits too well. :yay:

sooo how was this trolling? it was very clearly flutterluna sex.....

4058264
I thought people would come for the F/F clop and then be outraged by the M/M clop.

:rainbowhuh: I think I underestimated the brony tolerance of M/M, though. :rainbowwild:

Unsuccessful troll is unsuccessful. :facehoof:

4059421 figured , lel....

4059421
You went and accidentally good M/M clop. Also some of us are bi and this is fine.

4066884
The Invisible Pink Unicorn (bbhh):

Yes?
(Oh, and you can call me 'Goddess'. I prefer that.)

4071107
Heh, I always meant for it to be good. :twilightsmile:
That was part of the joke, hoping that a straight person would keep reading, become aroused anyway, then question his sexuality. ^.^

And yeah, I'm 11% gay, so I know what you mean. :raritywink:

Oh man this was good :moustache::heart:

4082410 I'm by so I would have erected no mater what and BTW that was an amazing story

4098165
Well good then. I'm glad you liked it!


4092966
:rainbowkiss:

4135633 I didn't really get a full blow erection, I was just saying, you know how to make a excellent clop-fic

4135716 BTW, I'm reading all of your stories as we speak, and so far The Relaspse is the best and needs to be updated asap!

4135837
Don't worry; you won't have to wait long.
Next (and final) update for that story is scheduled for tomorrow morning. :twilightsmile:

you... You are an amazing author... Not the best, mr. Christopher Paolini author of the Eragon series holds that title in my opinion, but amazing. I look forward to reading more of your stories good sir, well done! 1.bp.blogspot.com/-lIR_ZGoBntg/UjwIpwntClI/AAAAAAAABgk/voaEJSK29dc/s1600/give+cookie.jpg

4141477 YUS! ERAGON REFERANCE!

Sorry, got excited. I much agree with your opinions of both authors. Bravo, sir!

4147400 My favorite was the second book Brisingr. you?

4147400
Thanks! :twilightsmile:

4150513
Meh... If I'm going to read fantasy, I read hardcore fantasy.
Gimme some Tolkien, Salvatore, or Mercedes Lackey, please. :raritywink:
(Okay, so maybe Lackey isn't as hardcore as the other two, but she's still very good, and her Valdemar series makes me squee even more than MLP. :yay:)

4059421
Oh no, now a brony is questioning his sexuality. I think it has already happened before they found this story. :derpytongue2:

Only one word can describe this story; ...:moustache:

4192012 Good stories. I never read clopfics unless they also have backstory behind them, so you earned a like and fave long time ago!

4192014
My clop has story?
:rainbowhuh:
The only one I consider particularly story driven is The Relapse, and even then, not by much.

4196291 Well, it seemed to have a storyline...

4356065
Yeah...

I don't really like rape and all that.:unsuresweetie:

4356211

now-broarder
I guess.

:facehoof:
Do you do proofreading? Because you've got a talent for it, lemme tell ya.

“I love you.” Princess Luna snuggled closer to Fluttershy,

You may want to change this a tiny bit to make it obvious instead of just likely that it was Luna that spoke, otherwise it's not made clear until the next paragraph.

That one's fine, though.
Luna is the subject of that sentence, the one performing the action. Since one shouldn't mix two different characters' dialog and actions in one paragraph, that marks this paragraph as Luna's... which means the dialog is Luna's. :twilightsmile:

4359048
Heh, yeah... that's something I have to correct a lot when I do editing/proofreading for people.
It seems not many understand that.

Which is a shame, because it really cuts down on the need for unnecessary dialog tags.

this was a fun and unexpectedly hot little read. bravo.

4459071
have you read english witches its coming in the air tonight.
its oddly fitting to being a pseudo prequel to this.

Yes.

YES

Embrace the homo! :pinkiecrazy:

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