• Member Since 23rd Dec, 2013
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Silent Strider


Compulsive reader, novice writer.

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Twilight and friends were late to leave the land of the breezies, and are sealed inside when the portal closes. An old journal kept in Seabreeze's family for generations might provide the answer to this problem; another pony, a long time ago, found a way into the Breezie Kingdom.

Created for the Equestria Daily Writer's Training Grounds #010: "It Ain't Easy Being Breezies"

This story is an alternative ending to the episode It Ain't Easy Being Breezies.

Feel free to point any flaws; it's why I'm taking part in the Writer's Training Grounds, after all.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 4 )

I dunno. It feels like you're trying to finish this thing as fast as you can. The chapters are far too short, and plot points are just thrown out there with little exposition. I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to downvote this.

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No worries, at least you explained why you are downvoting. :twilightsmile:
Not many people do that, unfortunately.

For the record, anything I write for the EQD Writer's Training Grounds (which is almost everything I've written thus far) will feel, to some degree or another, rushed; it's roughly 4 days between the prompt being revealed and the deadline, and I'm not a fast writer.

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