Twilight's years at Celestia's school were far from ordinary. Here are the challenging trials, dangerous spells, and important lessons that made her the mare we know today.
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nice story. Interested where this is gonna go next
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Daring Do, and it is marked complete.
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lol
368150 Uhh, i think that's it.
I know... My bad
Oh geez this was adorable. And not the sugar-spun candy adorable, but the subtle, snuggling kind of adorable, which is my favorite kind. The description here is amazing, and Twilight's thoughts are perfect. Granted, some of the paragraphs need some spacing between them, and the fact that she'd be fully absorbed in a book only to toss it away one sentence later is disconcerting, but that's a minor thing.
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Thanks! I love cuddly-adorable too.
I'll fix that formatting error.
I think Twilight threw aside that book because it didn't have a lot of info on what she needed, maybe just one short chapter which she finished.
Nicely done. A good slice of life story hits the spot every now and then.
There are not enough stories with filly Twilight, only other one I've found is "Darkest Before Dawn". Good chapter, looking forward to more.
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I'm actually planning a few more chapters now that there's so much interest...
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Yay!
I really liked the attention to detail used to portray a rather mundane (but not in a bad way) scenario. For me, that's what slice of life is all bout, taking just the normal things that make up a life and turning it into a nice story.
A Most basic law of magic, huh?
I consider the rule itself to be simple tosh, Although i can see it's true impliance; "A power never used is better then a power over all."
As for the story itself, Twas a simple one, and it held twilight in a more believable fashion. And a favorable one at that, despite the setting.
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I think it's simpler than that. The law is supposed to prevent magic being used to cause pain or suffering (keeping the peace). It has little to do with controlling power. The bit about Luna was an afterthought to wrap up the chapter; just a reference to another case of magic used in a harmful fashion.
Twilight is more believable than what?
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1. Oic what you mean.
2. Honestly, i've completely forgotten.
I could see this as why she associated disappointing the princess with Magic Kindergarten, must have been a hell of a time
Another chapter! Sorry about the title; it was the only thing I could think of.
I'm pretty proud of this one. It's an idea I had in my head since I started this story.
I'd love to know what you think!
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Hm? How? (I'm not shipping, if that's what you mean)
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Why would you think me saying it is biblical as me commenting on shipping?
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Oh, sorry, it's just that I've heard it used as a euphemism for sexual. I couldn't immediately think of a story that fit this chapter, beyond basic be-careful-with-power themes.
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*grumbles* stupid idiots morons ruining another perfectly good word.
Since I reviewed the second chapter, think "In the Beginning..." and go from there for a couple verses.
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-duh-
I think my inbox got screwed up, I thought I got that comment on ch 4. That makes a lot more sense. Sorry for the trouble. I'll look at my messages more closely. It must be the mobile format.
Yup, I was going for a world-genesis story with Faust's character as the creator. It just came to mind. I really like those types of stories. I didn't really intend any Jesus in the appearance of the Princesses, but I guess that's an unavoidable conclusion for demigods in mythology.
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I figured it was Lauren Faust's Alicorn self, nice to know that I'm not the only one to use her as a god. So she gave her only begotten daughters... and so on? Well if you are going to rip of a creation story why not Genesis? Even with the creativity I have put into mine, I still bring in aspects of the Bible.
Very nice chapter.
Yessir, everything just got reallly reallly real.
fantastic short chapter.
The story was really good. I would have like the story to have been a bit longer but overall the pacing was good as well.
As good and cute as the story was I had noticed a few spelling mistakes such as 'Twilight a paused to take a sip of her tea' but nothing too bad or distracting. Great job and i'll be reading more of your stuff now.
Are you going to write anymore?
I really loved the story. Please write more!!!!
478075 Will you please write a fic of Twi teaching magic kindergarten?