A mysterious killer known as the Black Widow has been targeting husbands who abuse their wives. Seen as a hero by some and a horrible criminal by others, the Black Widow's most recent killing has caused a lot of stir in Ponyville. While investigating Private and Twilight get into an argument over the situation. To solve this, Cadence casts a spell on the pair of them that suddenly transforms them into Dusk Shine and Pruena Oculia. While learning how the other gender lives the pair have to get used to their new bodies before the Black Widow claims her next victim.
Chapters (8)
Ah, this is going to be interesting...
Ho boy... femnazis.
30 bits that the Black Widow is a butch lesbian.....
Well, this is going to get ugly and fast. I wonder will Private join the protesters when he is a mare? Best of luck Private. This could lead to an interesting story.
Feminism is a bit of a hard-sell in Equestria, given that the holders of the highest offices in the land are all female and have been for the last few millennia.
4043170 You'd be surprised what people are willing to protest about, if there is one guarantee about people, you can never satisfy haters.
What an odd agenda, well let's see where Black Widow goes.
Oooooooooooooooh boy, feminism backed by a mare version of Jack the Ripper. Agent, bring me my popcorn, this is going to be good.
4044176 Can you have him bring me some too? I want something to eat when everything goes R63.
I don't know why but I laughed my ass off at that line.
Cadence you troll.....
Anyone think Mayflower is the Black Widow and just needed a reason to stir up trouble?
I loved the references!
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Its a possibility, But then again its equally possible she's just a run-of-the-mill shit disturber hiding behind a cause. I'm on the fence right now.
Oh, and Cadence gearing up like Rambo = WIN.
Awe-FREAKING-some. I can't wait for the next chapter. I can't believe all the mares are so riled up by that protest. Man this is going to get bad if she gets up and starts preaching again. Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one.
Cadence is out as the Warrior of Love, so awesome and can't wait to the results of the switch-up.
Hey, I just realized something...
This chapter, which introduces a feminist women's right-like activist...
And according to Google, today's (or rather tomorrow) International Women's Day...
Am I only one seeing the irony here?
"Hell hath no fury like a mare's scorn." Says some famous person. Things are going to go all downhill from here.
Anyone else sees some stupidity for a femminest movement in Equstria When Most of the population are Females?
4049995 I say that everybody and everypony can be stupid at times. So why not now? When there is a mob there is no reason only action.
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What I mean is that in a female dominated sosciety they are not really needed
4050575 Well, sometimes that is never good enough for some people. Mayflower evidently has issues with the opposite sex, and is rather determined to make all males look like the bad guys.
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That sounders worse than a feminazi
4050845 Well, this Mayflower character could go different ways...
1. She could simply be a high and mighty bitch that hates stallions
2. She hates stallions because she or somepony she loved was either betrayed and/or raped by one.
3. She has a secret agenda and possibly in cahoots with the Black Widow...or is the Widow.
Either of the three is highly likely...
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as a long time fan of the noir series I see the third one as highly unlikely
4050868 I dunno, the last couple of cases (not counting 10, as it wasn't really a case) had been having obvious villains (No offense to you, Jacob).
Case 7: Tru'sent, the pony-hater (Ele'sium was a bit of a twist, but still expected)
Case 8: Loki (Any Thor fans probably saw that coming from a mile away)
Case 9: Soleil (Again, a painfully obvious villain)
But you may be right.
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I did nto really read 9
but do note that loki was just only menstion at the very last miniute
The last perspective was weird.
Okay, caught up on 4 months of noir i missed.
SHIT!
WOW. Just WOW. I like how you have Dusk and Pruena being affected by the different hormones. That is funny. Best Case Yet!!!!!
Just when I thought this couldn't get better...it did.
Understatement of the year there Pri...er...Pruena.
Wow...didn't think those guys would be so...evil. This Mayflower is creating such a mess...who is this woman that addressed Pruena? There is only a few ponies I know that could use the term 'darling'...
Must... resist... urge... to make... role-reversal jokes!
Can't... hold... it in... much longer....
*self applies anesthesia*
Well as much I want to find out about the plot, I'm finding more amusement from the gender-bending spell.
Not to suond rude But I really don't like your protrayl of males here too sterotypical
4074277 Not all males are like that, just the worst of them are shown here. I'm male so I have some idea as to how they'll act thank you.
4073484 The answer is Rarity. I think whether Pruna wants it or not, she is getting a dress, or is going to get comforted by Rarity.
Amazing chapter.
Not so easy living on the other team...hoo boy...
So Mayflower gives one (presumably) speech and suddenly all of Ponyville's couples are on the verge of falling apart at the seams to a degree that Cadance is affected...
Okay...that's not suspicious at all.
A Changeling drunk on love. It looks like he got too many feels.
D'aw! I'm glad Spike and Rarity made up and that Rares now knows what a bitch Mayflower is.
I called it. This is great. I can't wait for the next chapter.
*Commence slow clapping* And that's how you put a bitch in place.
4091521 *bows* Thank you. It's moments like this I enjoy being the co-writer on this series.
Glad Twilight and Private have made up, waiting now to see if Mayflower's agenda has any connection with Black Widow.
This is so wierd.... I love it!
Great job.
4091521 Amen to that. There is something off about this whole deal...and even though they tried to rape Pruena, I hope the stallions who are now single get their 'mares' back.