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Ponies Can Lick Too...

CHAPTER 1
A pony take on the Urban Legend : Humans Can Lick Too. For those curious this is the link: http://www.scaryforkids.com/humans-can-lick-too/

CHAPTER 2
*TBA

If chapter 1 does well only then will I continue this...

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KaBar42

KaBar42 #1 · Mar 6th, 2014 · · ·

This was horrible. Atleast Rainbow Factory made sense. In the text, of course.

This reading makes no sense at all.

xZFluttershyZx

xZFluttershyZx #2 · Mar 6th, 2014 · · ·

4040146 lol tbh, i think its pretty bad myself xD

Weeping Angel

Weeping Angel #3 · Mar 6th, 2014 · · ·

Um...

This made sense at first. Then with at the "gutting" of Fluttershy, I had no idea what was going on.

Plus it's not really an urban legend. It's a scary story. Urban legends are like Slenderman or Jack the Killer, etc.

But I liked this story because I don't like it when stories receive this much hate. ^.^

TwilightPoopSparkle

TwilightPoopSparkle #4 · Mar 6th, 2014 · · ·

What does that poem have to do with the story?

You still get an up vote.

Book Horse

Book Horse #5 · Mar 6th, 2014 · · ·

Liked the story in the link. I have over 600 stories in read later (funny, last night I was at 480...what am I doing with my life?) so I'll read this one later, too.

KaBar42