• Member Since 4th Mar, 2014
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A magic rock on the moon has the power to bring back Nightmare Moon! Princess Luna starts to have bad dreams about Nightmare Moon's return. But she doesn't say anything. Nopony has any idea of the danger. Will princess Luna tell somepony? Or will the night last forever!

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Comments ( 8 )

Holy Crap! That's a good start!

Luna saw a light flash
should be luna saw a flash of light
she walked to it
should be She walked over to the moon rock
Luna woke Celestia over her.
Should be luna woke with Celestia over her
Just helping out

Then she herd a voice.
Should be heard
Nightmare moon
Moon should be captielized
To many short sentences, you should consider placing a few sentences together.
Just being helpfu

canterlot
Canterlot should be capitalized
I am willing to be your editor, if you want homes :pinkiehappy::twilightblush:

Sorry about having to put Moonrock on Hiatus. I just haven't got around to working on it!

I know again. But I'm in a writing contest so I am working on that instead.

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