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A Mysterious Pony


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When the Cutie Mark Crusaders go on another one of their misadventures, they accidentally end up in the Everfree Forest, and have an unlikely encounter with one of it's most dangerous beasts. But will a beast itself form from this encounter later on?


Artwork by someone not me: Handsockz

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 38 )

I like this :)
keep up the good work:pinkiehappy:

The story didn't really flow as well as "Vinyl Sees a mosquito" did and there were quite a few mistakes but, if you were to fix them up the story wouldn't be half bad, though I don't really see myself reading it in the future.

4360020 I'm going to try to get the next chapter in on Friday or Saturday, I'll try to do it as soon as get the time.

I am halfway through the next chapter. But with that season 4 ending, which was awesome and so sweet, it'll probably take slightly longer to release the next one after that.

Pinkie, whack it with a sledgehammer! :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy: ... :applecry::scootangel::unsuresweetie:

A very enjoyable story. I hope you're planning to continue it.

Question: why would they have a Tasmanian devil in Equestria where there is no Tasmania? Next time you try something like that add a horse pun like TasMANEian.

4720982 Excuse my language, but what the buck are you talking about, good sir or madame?

You... are gonna update this story soon, right? I mean, Nightmare Night just passed, and this story totally fits that theme... Please tell me this story isn't abandoned. :fluttercry:

5223258 Nah, it is not abandoned, but i do have school and activities and clubs and such. I am working on the next chapter; I am also finishing a short story that is based off of a short horror-story my E.L.A. (English or Language Arts) teacher read to the class. So there's that... don't you worry, don't you fret I'll finish my chapter story even if we never met!

Hay There, Ms. Derpy
Hay There Ms. Derpy Equestria: Fallout parody

Good times, good times...

are you going to continue this?

5561705 No, I'm just... I don't even know. The more I live life the more I realize how-how hard it is? Eh, but I have a chapter chapter almost done. I'm just... thinking...

YAY! The fic isn't dead! *Smiles brightly*

5563661 That's all I really want; to make someone smile.

This story started out too awkward for me to read, but I couldn't just stop and risk missing something good, so I decided to sort of...skip some parts. Now in this chapter it's much less cringe-worthy, but then it's over (unfinished) before it begins. Please, at least start this story moving somewhere again. It's been what...a year? :unsuresweetie:

6199567 Sorry, man, I kinda went into depressed phase and just overthinking Life and everything about it. I understand you: wanting something to go somewhere because entertainment and distractions is the only way to blind ourselves of this miniscule existence we live and the cruel, evil, dark world we wish to escape and search for something more. And the only questions left to ask are, "What are we searching for?" And, "What will we do with it?"
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Sorry, I haven't been active for a long time.

"A smile is a mask." And mine is very overwhelming.
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Don't forget to look for me in the papers, or, in this world, the internet.

13 YEAR-OLD LOSES MIND, How She Finally Cracked

6227179 Whoa. I'm confused here. Are you that far down the metaphorical pit of depression? Are you trying to say you're just giving up on life? That's what your message leads me to believe. Believe me, I've been there...depression. Heck, I'm still fighting it. Just try not to dwell on the negatives. I feel like a hypocrite saying this because I struggle to practice it, and I know it's far easier said than done, but look for the good things in life that you can be thankful for. I don't know if I can give much else in the wise words department. I just hope you don't make a horrible mistake that you may not live to regret. When suicide is involved, no one wins. :ajsleepy:

Best wishes God bless. :twilightsmile:

Edit: I also forgot to mention that a smile doesn't have to be a mask. But I know that it's a lot more that way when you're depressed.

6227469 Nah, I'm not that far down, but thanks for your concern. I guess the world isn't that cruel; just 99% of the world. And about that suicide bit, meant to say this in the first sentence; oh, well, I know well enough that no pain could ever make me take my own life. I probably just feel down because my family are all working and the only living thing I can talk to is my dog; though, only when I'm really bored.

Although, I heard of some girl who is suicidal, was in my art class, emotionally depressed into hurting herself, and I'm most likely going to have the same classes with her in high school.

Is it a bad thing or good thing that kind of want to become her friend and help through whatever that's putting her down? Seems like she needs someone to keep her stable and happy.

Just need some advice or yes or no answer with explanation. Feel free to ask other people on this site; they can answer, too, I don't mind. Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

6242673 It's good to hear that you would never take your own life. I was worried there for a bit.

As for befriending that girl at school? Go for it! It's nice of you to want to help. I should warn you though to be wary about how much negativity you're exposed to though. When you're already depressed, being around other people that are depressed can (not saying it will, just that it's possible) make you feel worse. If she is absolutely impossible to cheer up, then don't push yourself so hard that she pulls you down with her. Some people WANT to be sad all the time, for whatever reason. In that situation, I suppose you should give the person support, but make sure you're not giving all the emotional strength you have. You still of course have to take care of yourself emotionally.

About the lack of company, I would offer my hand in friendship, and maybe I kind of still am, but I don't think I'd be able to keep you much company. I have a handfull of friendships I'm juggling and trying not to drop, and some that I want to rekindle and such. If you want to PM each other sometimes I can do that. :pinkiehappy: But at this point I think that's all I've got. I'm not always good at quick replys either. :applejackunsure:

6242872 Thanks, guy. I finally got a lot of great, incredible friends this and last year, but I don't really hang out with them that much. I talk to one of them more than all of my other friends. Hehe, she always "angry" whenever I don't, playfully, say we're best friends. I guess I'm sick of interacting with others because when I was younger no one interacted with me. Then, someone actually tried to be friends with me last year (we're friends, now). I guess, my personality really started to develop. I'm not that bitter elementary schooler anymore. I'm an average middle school to high school kid.

Again, thanks! Also, question: Is 10th grade Geometry and 11th grade Chemistry hard? I don't know if you're in it or already did it or never had it in your curriculum, just a question. I'm going to both in 9th grade and the Common Core subjects, all honors. I gotta prepare myself! !,!

6244366 Well, Geometry wasn't very hard for me to understand, but I never took Chemistry. I'm not sure why, but I don't think it was required. :applejackunsure:

Thank you for sharing and it's been good talking with you.

God bless you in your future and maybe we'll talk again some day. :twilightsmile:

6245313 Same to you! And thank you! By the way, I don't think I'll be making stories for a bit.

I'm into anime! #animephase

6247213 :rainbowlaugh: Nice, I went through that. I still watch some, but not as much. It's too bad you won't be writing as much, but we all have our interest phases. Enjoy your anime and I'll hopefully talk to you again some day. :twilightsmile:

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