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Continue, my good sir. You have an interesting writing style.
I wish to see more of your fine work.
So all three of them have the same Cutie Mark?
This is great.
I can't wait 'till they get to the testing!
Excellently executed, the writing flows well and the progression feels natural. A bit fast pace, I think, but it's not a bother. I demand mooore!
Quite an interesting read. I'm looking forward to more. Especially when the CMC find their first, sentient SCP. Also, it's nice that you used an original SCP (at least I don't know about those dice from the main site) instead of just using the most famous.
This Fic! I like it! Out of interest, which SCP number are the dice, or are they an invention of your own?
It had my interest... Now you got my full attention. I can't wait for more!
It is an intriguing idea to see the birth of SCP in such a light. I admit I would like to see a dossier of the dice, but I suppose the CMCs are a little too young to be able to do such a thing. Scootaloo the field agent, Sweetie Belle the Administrator, and Applebloom the researcher in charge of containment. I could see it if they grew up another decade.
I'll give a tentative favorite.
I really like this, I can't wait for the next update, but could you tell me witch SCP this is I don't know it
Alright, I've given this some more thought and here are some things to consider.
First you will need to be careful with the balance of power. The SCP's need to be dangerous enough so the CMC will see the need to lock them up but they still need to be able to be contained by them.
One possibility in that regards is one of the possible SCP-001's. The Foundation itself. I don't know how well that would work in practice but it would be a possibility, to have some agents appear that see the CMC as leaders for their containment cutie marks.
Lastly, what would an SCP be in a magical world? I think you already have a good idea, since Twilight was not able to detect anything abnormal in the dice. Having such potentially dangerous effects without magic, could be a good staple of what makes an SCP an SCP in Equestria. Where magic is commonplace, something that has strange powers despite the absence of it would be very abnormal.
You sir, have my approval with a medal. Continue pls, and can we read SCP-990 talking to the three of them in their dreams?
This sounds like a great story so far. Hope that you update it again soon. This has humor and chaos written all over it.
You really should finish this, it seems great so far.
Any word how the next chapter is coming along?
Careful, Scoots. That sounds awfully GOC-y of you. Sweetie's right, which reminds me of a certain chair...
Awesome work.
TESTING! Testing, testing, testing...
Ah, nice to see this fic is being continued. Another interesting chapter, kudos for using original SCP's too. But now I wonder how the three of them continue keeping their finds a secret, now that another pony outside their group has been affected.
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Maybe Sweetie Belle's magic specialization will be amnesiac spells? It's a thought.
4132092 That would make sense, the Foundation is working a lot with amnesiacs. But first the CMC will need to decide that the mere knowledge of these artifacts is dangerous enough to warrant memory erasure.
For a single horrifying moment, I thought Juggles was Bobble the Clown. Equestria does not need Bobble floating around anywhere.
I''m liking this more and more. I doesn't go straight to the apathetic evil the Foundation is known for. This goes with my general headcanon that Equestria is a Crapsaccharine World.
I agree with Journeyman, I thought it was Bobble for a second, too.
This story continues to be interesting. Keep up the good work.
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If he was...
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On a side note, are you going to be writing any dossiers? That would be interesting to see. I've written a few myself.
you are a god among man, please continue.
I'm starting to see a little issue. You have quite the fondness for said tags. It gets distracting after a while when the CMCs are bouncing ideas back and forth and all we see are slightly different said tags again and again. It's best to interspace them with the occasional action tag.
Very nice, a bit fast paced, but super nice. Slow clap good sir...though I hate to see how they handle things when they are older.
SCP. CMC. Combine the two and you get disaster...
And that right there is the difference between them and the Foundation. Loving it!
That sea monster intrigues me. I guess we'll soon see exactly how many others know about SCP's. Because if this is about the CMC containing them, they have to get some chance to contain something like that monster.
Simply excellent, once again! A few tips for grammar though:
I think you need to use commas better, as they mark a pause between sentences instead of a full stop.
Then and than can be annoying to keep track of, but just repeat until it sticks. Then is time, than compares, if that makes sense.
And lastly, their, they're and there. It could have been a small one-time error, but aleays check twice for these. I hope this helps to improve your storywriting :)
.. i really hope the CMC won't try to test that cup
4237035 let's see how long it shall last...
Curiosity killed the D
Well good luck!
Celestia ain't approving of that shit!
I think Celestia might recognize the mark. Knowing the sheer amount of transdimensional objects the Foundation possesses, Celestia may have gotten some of of their garbage in her backyard every once in a while.
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She might have spent some time as an SCP at one point.
So awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Like Draugurs, I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it comes out soon.
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So I take it the CMC will be badass in this story?
Do you know how to reply to comments?
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
Is this fic dead?
Update Please!!!!!!!!
Reading the title, cutie mark scrambler pistol catchers?
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That would be 'SPC' not SCP. The acronym in this case stands for 'Secure, Contain, Protect'.
On a different note, if you really want to understand, then I would suggest googling 'SCP foundation'. And possibly avoiding some of the creepier ones if you can be skittish. (I tend not to be and still avoid some)
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Alternate abbreviations are not always 'SCP'.
Just look at the Shark Punching Center.
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huh... I guess I forgot how crazy the net can be. Oh well.
I still recommend these SPCs from the site
SCP 999
SCP 682
SCP 173
And SCP 049
I think you did good with this chapter. While no new SCPs were introduced, this chapter definitely expanded the plot of your story. Keep up the good work.
Ahhh.... So the sisters are the pony equivalent of the GOC.