After a Great War ravages Equestria leaving only two ponies alive, Equestria lies empty, deserted and the two ponies find themselves alone.
Between them, they spend their years searching for survivors, to no success.
However, one of them has a plan to change and fix everything.
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I got nothing to say about this.......
....I think my stomach fell into the pit.
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Is that good or bad?
4077864 Eh. Both. Even the changelings have won the war. How did Queen Chrysalis get so strong? Gah!! I want to kill Queen Chrysalis now!
4077925 Love for loved ones who may be dead or dying on the fields of battle is a strong force... :p
Well, if you've enjoyed it, don't forget to send your friends this way :p
4077934
I see. Well. I have OC Geoffrey and he is a pony who can take in rage.
And second will there be any battle happening in some chapters. I really would like to see Twilight and Princess Cadance to avenge lost of their friends and Princess Celestia.
Seeing Queen Chrysalis winning and now that she win the war it make me angry.
4077952
Win the war? Cadance and Twilight are alone, and there are no survivors from within the explosion (yet).
4077963 Did i say "Win the war?"
I was talking about will there be any battle happening in some chapters.
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She really isn't evil in this story, just misunderstood. :P
and the stories aim isn't death, but changing the present.
4077996
You said win the war before.
And there might be some more battle scenes.
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Really?
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Yes, hopefully the next chapter will show that.
Pretty good. Nice usage of the cliffhanger at the end of the chapter and well done with the exposition.
4078166 ok
4077864 I don't know exactly what motivations Chrysalis has for killing them all but I think she's extremely out of character. Not for behaving evil no... but for killing them. Remember in Canterlot? She imprisoned Princess Celestia. Would it not be wiser of her to capture them? Also she could have knocked them all unconscious or burned them. As it stands there is un-nessecary gore to drive the point home.
There is also the idea that changelings ravaged the whole of Equestria that they conquered themselves which proves to be illogical figuring as it was their own. Also... where are they? What exactly happened and resulted in no ponies and changelings in Equestria? Because as it stands changelings and ponies don't exist anywhere.
Lots of Questions with little to no answers. I will keep track of this but you have a lot to answer to.
5618412 this invasion was literally just about revenge, slaughtering as many ponies as possible. And the reason, which will get better explained if I ever continue, why the changelings are gone too is because their entire race or at least those that followed Chrysalis were gathered in Ponyville and destroyed in the explosion
5620995 Uhuh... please do continue.
5621015 Sadly, the main plot story that drives this story, the changing of the present, has long been forgotten. If I wanted to continue, I'd have to rewrite my plot
5621431 You mean it would be time travel?
5621432 Yes, but with very strict reasoning :)
5621434 What do you mean strict reasoning?
5621435 I mean, it's something that Twilight explicitly forbid, but eventually found out something that meant both ponies and changelings were actually victims and decided it necessary to change the past
5621523 I see... interesting.
5621549 Original plan was a big bad which framed the Ponies by attacking the Changeling capital which is why the Changelings attacked Equestria, which Twilight finds out about and decides both were victims and to change the timeline. But I wasn't sure it was a great idea
5621552 I think it's awesome. I was actually planning something like it. Only my villain was a changeling ex enemy of Chrysalis.
5621556 The enemy was going to be an eternal, much like Discord
5621591 I have the idea of such a draconequus ((if it is one)) by the name Link Joker. In any case I would love to talk more about this in skype or pm. My skype is dionysiosbbbb
4077925 bring fourth the undying demon of the shadows, the white terror, he who held back the tide against ten thousand demons, he who can bend the very fabric of time! Let them know TRUE FEAR!!
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