Meh, it was okay I guess.

A (somewhat belated) Hearts and Hooves day present to my beau.

That must be one helluva relationship.

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Well you've clearly had no experience with me before this so... Anyway, misleading people is basically my job.

I absolutely loved reading this, and I do hope you make it into a small series. I'd me more than happy to contribute a few stories myself...

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Oh no, all of my feels... Oh wait, I actually don't give a single shit.

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You're down-voting a story because you disagree with a story-tag and you had your feelings hurt. Wow, I'd love to see where your priorities are if your house was burning down... would you complain that the fire engine sirens were too loud?

4029012 You know my uncle used to be a firefighter a long time ago, the first thing people would say was always the same: Coudn't you come any sooner?! Just a thing a wanted to share about fires and stuff. (I have 8 uncles just so you know)

Well now that took a turn I was not at all expecting, and I loved it. Would be awesome to see more along these lines but if a fantastic one shot it must stay that's fine too.

This was wonderful! I love the fact that it was only pseudo rape, I get this knot in my stomach that keeps me from going off when someone is genuinely in pain.

And yes, I read the ending before the story, just to be sure.

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Well geez, way to ruin the "surprise"... Still I'm glad you enjoyed it, as awkward as it was to write this way.

I liked this story quite a bit. Surprise twist that, in all honesty, made me feel a bit better about the story in general. If you do decide to make this sort of thing into a series, I'll definitely be reading it. Best of luck with your future writing, I can't wait to read more!

~SolidFire

Very nicely done.

I really liked this. I was a little like "oh no where's he going with this" for a bit, but the end made it all worth it.

Very nice surprise at the end. :3

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I tweaked my comment a bit. Hope that helps, sorry if I ruined it for anyone else.
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Oh yes, I definitely agree. More would be a delight to read!

4037373 whoops

I would totally love with a followup on this, mainly on starshadow though, the idea of a filly sized mare is just asking for a CMC shenanigans story.

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And shenanigans it would be, I can assure you. But first there's the little matter of scandalizing the entire town...

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forgive my lack of understanding, but whatever do you mean by scandalizing the town? If she was a new pony in town, nopony would know who she was and treat her like a lost filly, which would of course provoke the cliche(?) "i'm not a child/filly". Alternatively, if you think it would fit her character, she could pretend to actually be a little filly for quite a while.

side note: I have no problem if a sequel is just a T/E rated story, I'm sure i can control my hormones for long enough to enjoy a nice comedy.

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Not to give anything specific away, but let's just say this... Starshadow is very, very good at pretending.

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Oh! I was actually just looking for confirmation that a followup was in the works, so you now have my follow.

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I have another story I've been neglecting that I need to update, but yes I'm fairly certain this will become a mini-series as ideas come to me.

*blink* what a twist!

Please do

OOoh! ~Well played~

That... was a lot nicer then I expected it to be...

How wonderful!

10/10. like and Favorite from me.

More foalcon bondage please, i really liked this, slightly disappointed at the end however, only cus i am a sick fucker who wish it wasn't roleplay.
any way great story, would have kept her gagged the whole time if it where me

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Heh, I always love it when I get complaints about not going far enough. But yeah, if you want clop that stays dark throughout, you'll have to look to my partner/Master/lover...

Anyway, I think I can probably satisfy that need for more foalcon. As for foalcon bondage... we'll see.

You know, the title probably should have told me something about the fic's ending... but fuck titles. Who pays attention to them anyways?
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At least this isn't like Cruel and Unusual where i'll feel like shit after reading it.

She then turned away from the nozzle, content to simply let the hot water rush over

Uh...unfinished line? What?

Also, 'Black Quill'? Whenever I hear (or, uh, read, since this is text, not audio) 'Black Quill', I immediately think of a wrongly-convicted samurai prosecutor with a pet hawk named 'Taka'. Perhaps that's just me...

I really enjoyed reading this. But is there ever a time when you don't enjoy reading clop? Well, I guess there's been a few awful ones, but most clop-fics are average-ish or good. But this is better than good. Very good for clopping to, and while I normally dislike foalcon, I loved this. And I love that twist at the end, you sneaky person.

He smiled down at her. His fillyfriend was one of the few ponies in all of Equestria that knew the truth about him, that beloved children's author Hard Cover and notorious clop writer Black Quill were in fact one and the same.

Honestly finding this out would be like finding out Dr. Seuss wrote 50 shades of gray.

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Actually, based on how horribly inaccurate that story is to what BDSM is really like, I wouldn't be surprised if she secretly was Dr. Seuss...

Well, it looks like we got a look into what Starshaodw's life was like before it all went to shit and she met Big Mac, and now we know why she's so small compared to other mares. And why she's so sexually active and always ready for a rut. Still very well written.

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Definitely an interesting idea! I'm not sure why I liked it despite not really being into that kind of bondage/rape, but it's probably your writing skills.

Satisfied with her response, Black Quill reached over with his hoof and placed it on the filly's head, gently mussing her hair. His gentle ministrations were rewarded with a contented hum from Starshadow as she leaned into the stallion's touch, resting her body against his side. Black Quill allowed a predatory smile to flash across his features at this; the filly had completely let her guard down to him. Perfect.

I'd love to see a sequel to this/more chapters showing how their relationship develops