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After a long, long time during which their students have proven themselves over and over again, the Princesses decide they are ready to learn the final secret of Equestrian royalty - succession.

Thanks to Deathirst for use of his pic as cover art.

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So do they die or just pass on into the afterlife?

This is pretty good for 1100 words, and pretty darn good for a random story off the front page. There's a lot more I wish the story covered, and it's really hard to get into characters' heads enough in that short a time to build up the emotional connections that make the feels pay off — but what's here is pretty tightly written. There's no cheap effort to falsely build suspense, and it does a good job of implying depth beyond what's on the page. I hope you continue writing! :twilightsmile:

My only question is, who the hay is Tierce Shade?

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Well, they kind've _have_ to be dead to go to the afterlife, so... yes.

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