After a long, long time during which their students have proven themselves over and over again, the Princesses decide they are ready to learn the final secret of Equestrian royalty - succession.
Thanks to Deathirst for use of his pic as cover art.
After a long, long time during which their students have proven themselves over and over again, the Princesses decide they are ready to learn the final secret of Equestrian royalty - succession.
Thanks to Deathirst for use of his pic as cover art.
So do they die or just pass on into the afterlife?
This is pretty good for 1100 words, and pretty darn good for a random story off the front page. There's a lot more I wish the story covered, and it's really hard to get into characters' heads enough in that short a time to build up the emotional connections that make the feels pay off — but what's here is pretty tightly written. There's no cheap effort to falsely build suspense, and it does a good job of implying depth beyond what's on the page. I hope you continue writing!
My only question is, who the hay is Tierce Shade?
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Well, they kind've _have_ to be dead to go to the afterlife, so... yes.