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BlazzingInferno


Engineer, Brony, Aspiring Author. Not necessarily in that order.

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Faced with the prospect of never flying again, Lightning Dust learns something about friendship from an unexpected source.

Received an honorable mention in the EFNW 2014 Writing Contest!

Cover art generously provided by High-Roller2108

This is 100% Approved by Twilight's Library!

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Comments ( 8 )

So Princesses cure everything if you prove yourself. Hmmm... not sure how to feel about that. Kinda makes sense in that universe. Now back and join the Wonderbolts!

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Thank you for the thumb and the library admittance, good sir!

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You're very welcome
(sorry about the late reply, was traveling :ajsleepy:)

Soooo, what? Lightning Dust's wings couldn't be cured by regular doctors because they didn't understand the lightning was caused by a magical spell? Princess Celestia can just magically cure illnesses others cannot? There's a decent story waiting to be picked at in here about Lightning Dust finding out how fair-weather friends can be (no pun intended), but it feels fairly brushed over to push through some metaphor with the books and the ending is too jarring with Celestia's appearance.

Hm, not too bad. Wouldn't mind seeing a followup to this, unlikely as that would be.

I wish there was some sort of follow up or something.

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