Someone needs to give spike a thorough sex education and quick.

The way Rarity blushed at Sky Sparks makes me wonder what she did last night with him after dinner.

Honestly, while I love the idea behind this, the story is starting to annoy me.

They all seem OOC (especially the way Twilight has been acting), and right now it seems this entire story is filled with bad drama (as in, drama for the sake of drama). What's the point of Sky Sparks being in the story? Yes, I get that he's there to create drama (which is being done rather poorly), but the problem is that the whole thing feels completely contrived. Sky Sparks hasn't even tried to hide what a horrible personality he has (to the point of yelling at and insulting Twilight, Spike and Rarity), yet Rarity seems like an oblivious moron. Prince Blueblood, who she couldn't even stand, was less of a jerk than Sky Sparks.

Basically, the entire plot of this story started falling apart the moment Sky Sparks was introduced, because it absolutely destroys my suspension of disbelief to think that Rarity wouldn't have told him off the moment he so much as opened his mouth. The fact that she hasn't, and still seems interested after the way he's acted makes me pretty much lose all interest in the story.

Honestly, I wish you hadn't included him for the sake of needless drama. Spike growing closer to both Twilight and Rarity (preferably without the random OOC moments) would have been a great enough story, but what's happening now is more irritating than interesting.

Man, my heart was pounding yet the last part of the chapter settled the fears.

Spike quickly rubbed his face to dry his eyes but managed to smear some of the sticky liquid on his face. "Um... Okay, Rarity! I'm coming!"

Oh, you dog. "Coming"