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It's buttons first week in ponyville and hearts and hoofs day has just come up. Button doesn't really care about this holiday and wants nothing to do with it but button is getting second thoughts after he meets with a white coated filly named Sweetie Belle. What will button do in this loving holiday.
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>Hoofs
>Button Mash
>didn't capitalize his name
Not enough nope.
Hooves. I am done here, proceed.
Yeah I know I sucks it my very first fimfiction and I use google drive and it doesn't fix the spelling.
4021970 you sir, I don't know who you are or what you were trying to write, but I am going to find you and put you in a corner with nothing but a dictionary and a thesaurus and you can leave that corner when your done reading.
The concept is pretty good, but:
The pacing was terribly rushed.
The grammar was making me cringe every line.
There was little to no explanation or detail.
Sweetie, your horn on the cover pic is not supposed to be in that position...
4021970
You can use Microsoft Word for the proofreading. Although it doesn't help a lot but I think its better that Google Drive though.
4027376
I read this while listening the song mine turtle and it just at the funniest part I couldn't stop laughing and I don't remember a time I laughed so hard online
Great concept, but...
Editor, maybe?
I think I might be able to help with the grammar and spelling, if you want me to.
You said you use Google Drive, correct?
PM me if you want to work something out.
L.O.L normally i say "Mom I don't want to go to school"