• Published 4th Mar 2014
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The Black Knight - Zaralann



In and unfamiliar land, with powers that shouldn't exist and the only goal of getting back home, she doesn't care if they will praise her or curse her, she will do anything to get her life back!

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OMAKE: Are you my Master?

In the shadow of the Crystal Cave under Canterlot Castle two red eyes opened.

"You proved to be even more interesting than I anticipated, my dear." The voice was hoarse but the mirth was not lost to anyone listening. "But lets make it a bit harder, shall we?"

Suddenly hundreds of palm-sized pieces of paper flew from the darkness, each carrying a familiar mark. The same mark that changed one boy's life forever will now be the tool to help people in need, Emiya Shirou would have been proud. Each piece of paper with the Command Seals of Emiya Shirou vanishing in different directions.

One went to the mad knight that worshiped the sun.

One went to the Demon hunting for the skulls of its enemies.

One went to the pair of deranged fun-loving users of Life-Energy.

One went to the powerful sorcerer of unorthodox arts.

One went to the monster of flesh who hunts monsters of the mind.

One went to the warrior who knew no fear and desired battles that would tear the heaves asunder.

One went to the bounty hunter who took payment in his target's sins.

And many more of them flew, scattering through the worlds.

"This will make it a tad bit more interesting. Once someone touches those invitations, they will know what to do to summon the mightiest warrior, the King of Knights to their side. Lets see how others will handle the unbeatable King." The pair of red eyes closed, and the last thing that could be seen was a fanged smile.

Author's Note:

I will give you one chance to guess who was that.
You can thank Valthorn Illian and his story The Last Ride for basically inviting me on the bandwagon.

Comments ( 103 )

Could it... could it be?! This is...:pinkiegasp: *GASP*:pinkiegasp:

I'm gonna go with Sombra.

Who's the 'Powerful sorceror of unorthodox art'? The link goes straight to the LoHaV page.

tierek from my little pony g1? I bet I spell it wrong whelp...

4328689 Please, take a deep breath and try to formulate it into a sentence.:scootangel:
4328700 Wrong, and his eyes are different.:facehoof:
4328742 Fixed.:twilightsheepish:
4328743 Nope.:facehoof:

Its zelretch , the old man of the jewels and the user of the second magic isnt it?

Holy cow is this going to be a type of crossover with the other stories. Where they summon jessica?

4328763 Correct!:twilightsmile:
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Damn it!:facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:
Reflex...
4328771 Nah, it's more like I gave people the permission to use my Character in their Fics with but only if they will keep her in-character, so to speak.:raritywink:

4328820 so it won't affect this fic. But its open to use in other fic? Sounds like a cool idea


4328759 worth a guess...:twilightblush:

4328820 do you think they will do it?

4328759 I know, it just sounded like something he would do, and I couldn't think of anyone else off the top of my head... :twilightblush:

Hmmm...
...*Adds to fav list*
...This is relevant to my interests...
...If only so I can see how our characters would react to each other...

4328903 Pretty much yeah...:twilightsheepish:
4328921 I actually didn't see the original show with him, so...:twilightblush:
4328979 I hope so... It will be interesting...:twilightsmile:
4329081 Well, it's just the fact that Crystal Empire is still underground...:twilightsheepish:
4330225 Good luck!:pinkiehappy:
4330308 Just an attempt to give people a little bit of freedom!:yay:

Oh, Zeltretch. One of the great things about this little niche of stories that I love is how open we all are with our characters, and letting others use them. This is most likely going to make it into an omake for my story, and I already know how.

The knight who worships the sun, you silly troll you!

And the owner of the red eys is none other than Squidward Tentacles!

I know Someone who'll be getting a special courier package.

4330562
See that's what I don't get. Some people are throwing a hissyfit when somebody uses their character for one of their story's saying that it's theirs and all that BS when they took a whole universe (or several for crossovers) including all of the characters without the creator(s) agreeing to it.:facehoof:

Being that open should be a given. Of course it is polite to ask but as far as I'm concerned the author of an fanfic has no moral ground to reject such a request.

Sorry if I made you feel obligated to do crossovers, I was just trying to plug a story I enjoy.

Well... seeing as even though it's a short not-really-official chapter, I might as well just keep up my track record here. And I should go back and fix the advise on Pegasi/Pegasus. I keep forgetting to do that.

will now be the took to help people in need

Tool.

with the Command Seals of Emiya Shirou vanish in a different direction

Vanishing in different directions.

One went to the Demon hunting for skulls of its enemies

Hunting for the skulls.

One went to the pair of deranged fun-loving users of the Life-Energy

Extra The.

One went to the powerful sorcerer of unorthodox art

Arts.

One went to the monster of flesh who hunts monsters of mind

Monsters of the mind.

One went to the bounty hunter who took payment in his target's sins

Targets.

Once someone will touch thous invitations, they will know what to do to summon the mightiest warrior

Once someone touches those invitations.

The pair of the red eyes closed

Extra The.

Ya know Saber's thoughts actually makes sense
Logically speaking none of the mane six even have military training
Yes I know Show Intended for Little Girls but Black Knight here is anything but that, so the whole theory of Celestia -planned everything- seems to be true so far since Luna did confirm Celestia is behaving erratically, but then again the Tia from 1000 years ago is not the Tia of now so......
I am half expecting Saber to go with Gilda to the Gryphon's Kingdom and ending up worshiped as some Goddess of War or Valkyrie it would be hilarious

Idea!
Mane Six Used Elements of Harmony on Saber Alter!
Congratulations Your Saber Alter evolved into Saber Lily!

Hey, was wondering, in the first chapter where Jessica was in the park. was that place in Fuyuki?

4354784 You'll have to wait and see like everyone else.
4354881

4360448 Eeehh, I posted the answer on this question in the first Chapter's comments.:facehoof:
4334685 Nah, it's okay! Your story is awesome, and the fact that mine was mentioned means that it actually worth something!:pinkiehappy:

4363505 i kinda prefer that then her just appearing in equestria directly. It feel mysterious

It would be so cool if you wrote Saber's POV when the two funny douchebags, Tobi and... fuck it! Can't spell his name! summoned her in the story Screw the rules we're on a road trip it would probably be funny as hell.

4398525
Alter Saber. The term is Alter Saber.
Or at least, the normal corrupted version is. We can call this one Darth Saber since it isn't really Alter Saber.

some times I stare at the sceen for a time just hopeing that a new chapter(s) will come out

love this fic, pls update soon:heart:

also SABER OF RED TEAM!

TGM

I'm sorry to say I waited until now to read this. the 10,000+ word chapters were a daunting, daunting thing... :facehoof:

But this is good...good...perhaps we can benefit from one another...:moustache:

One word: MMMOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment posted by insania exitium deleted Jun 17th, 2014

Just in case you didn't know Jimmy the Grape deleted the league of villians thing then someone made a new one so you'll have to go to that and repost that story there.

the cover looks like an evil version of Saber from the Fate anime

I Need More Caps, Please :fluttershysad:

4720107 I'll take another read through and see what I can do. I'm trying not to mess with his flow too much, and leave him to do what he does, but even I find it's a lot of italics. It didn't bother me too much, then again not many things do, but a lot of people have been mentioning them so I'll see how I can improve it.

Dude please continue this story! I am greatly looking forward to the inevitable showdown with the princesses.

whens next chapter

:twilightoops:after watching the new UBW anime, i got a GARGASM :fluttershbad: oh the fight scene, archer showing how gar he is, and the better quality. Animation:pinkiesad2: i feel very GAR right now:flutterrage:

Comment posted by Gojirason deleted Nov 9th, 2014

First time I read through this with no knowledge of Fate/Type-Moon and now that I reread it after watching UBW I can't help but laugh at how fucked the 'ponies' are... :derpytongue2::pinkiecrazy:

Can't wait to read more of this. Nice to read a FIM story with appropriate levels of retaliation by the HiE for attempted harm to them.

When? For the love of G-d, when?

Hope you'll continue this. A great story so far, good fighting mechanics and great in depth explanation on what is going on in "Saber's" head.

4363505 so I know you probably been asked this a lot but when do you plan on a next Chapter being out

Chapter's coming soon?

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