• Member Since 23rd Feb, 2014
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Captain Burrito


Not really in the fandom anymore. Sorry!

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Spitfire's always been told that she's not good enough. That she's worthless. That she'll never amount to anything.

Sometimes, though, when your whole life is burning you, somepony can show you how to blaze through it all.

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Comments ( 17 )

Short and sweet. Just the way I like it:twilightsmile:

4016259 thanks. I'm so glad someone likes my writing!:raritystarry:

BEST STORY ON FIMFICTION LOVE IT :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

4035583 Aww! Thanks! I'm glad I've gotten such a positive reaction for this, it was only really a one timer!:pinkiehappy::twilightsheepish:

4069012
Aww! If you like that...check your school email. :derpytongue2:

My gosh PAF/Z...YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER:pinkiehappy:

4069347
Awww!

You get a mustache!:moustache:

YESH TAKE TTHAT WORLD IVE GOT A MOUSTACE. :moustache::moustache::moustache:

Comment posted by Captain Burrito deleted Oct 10th, 2014

YAY! IMM AGO READ IT! :rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::duck::trollestia:

Nice... I liked it. Good use of Philomena too. Up vote whether it matters or not.

This is a very nice fic. Nice backstory for the team, for spitfire herself.

Uhh.... One thing though...

brother/stallionfriend.

I beg of you change this before a troll uses it as ammunition.

Other than tha6t, Fav, like and follow!:twilightsmile:

4555568 Thanks! Thanks for following me, too!

Cool story! :pinkiehappy: I quite agree with your characterization of Spitfire here (in the idea that she thinks/is told she is worthless. It's a major element in my fanfic about her), and it's cool to see someone have a familiar portrayal of her backstory/motivations. :moustache:

And "hornhead" is the best racist terminology I've heard in my life :rainbowlaugh:

5769963 Thanks! Glad you liked it!

I can't take credit for that, unfortunately, I read it in a fanfic. :rainbowlaugh: I do like it, though!
Also thanks for the watch!

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