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MadMaxtheBlack
Too much to write; too little time
MadMaxtheBlack
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Wow.
That was...
Um...
That was really good...
Sick but kinda hot.
no hate, not bad for a first clop fic you write...
buy Mrs Cake needs some lovin max... off you go to write your next clop
This story is fairly nice and done right to the point.
For your first time? That was excellent! I will await more of this!
It seemed better than ok, but I don't know about anyone else, but I like to build backstory first before attempting to write the true clop. you did just that, just in a different way than expected. congratulations on writing your first clop/sex scene by the way.
Oh, and this practice for your main story, Your Human and You? xD
SEND IT STRAIGHT TO THE FEATURED BOX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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JK
For a first attempt that was great, had enough backstory on the character and you used varying phrases so I'd say it's a solid 7/10
first attempt my flank! That was some grade A stuff.
Well, that was interesting....
Very good start. Good for getting aroused but it would need to be a bit longer with more descriptions to really clop to this.
When you said don't pick your OC I thought you probably would've killed them off in some horrible way. I did not expect gang bang.
And I am totally ok with it. Good job.
4021478 I've found that some people don't like it when their OC's are thrown into situations like this. Some people get really aggressive and protective of their pretend pony.
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Personally i'm just happy I had an OC or an idea of mine used, bonus points for being the main character. I could get a short cameo and be satisfied.
Besides, this OC was an on-the-spot female rewrite of another OC of mine.
I thought this was weird, to be honest. I was reading it on the bus ride to Springfield, so I wasn't really into it, though.
Lol 69 likes.
All I can think of is a mouth full of dirt.
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Odd phrasing aside, this is abnormally good for a first try. In my mind, characters are just as, if not more, important as the sex. It was weak in this, but I'll forgive you as this was just pure fucking. The actual sex part is very well written. If you do put this in YHAY, with a little work on the sex and the already established characters and emotions, you may cause spontaneous orgasm. Unless it's a non romantic scene, then fuck you.
Also, "Tank you."
That....was.....AWESOME!
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I totally don't like clop
(lies!)
SHUT UP ANNOYING INTERNAL VOICE!
Anyway, now I'm going to read this because you told me to not read it if I didn't want it. And then I'll pour hate comments into it because I chose to read something I knew I wouldn't enjoy in the first place!
I are smarticles!
THIS STORY AWE FULL! I HAT IT! WHY WRITE AR BRING SUCH BAD WRITING TO SITE? I WANT GET LOST AUTOR! GO FOOCK USEF!
As promised, I gave you hate comments.
You're welcome!
4111006 Thank you, that was much appreciated.
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BTW, the I are Smarticles bit means that's literally my name.
Smarticles.
prounounced
Smar-ti-cleas.
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Ahahaha!! Hahaha-Nope.
Absolutely clopworthy.
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nice to read one of your first stories like this here
nothing negative to say, i think the picture below captures my sentiment here
I don't really know how I got here, but I think I made a wrong turn.
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Love the concept; love the story. Though I was surprised at the lack of build-up, that didn't bother me as much as how short it was...
The cream of the clop is full of details, enough to stretch thirty seconds into five minutes.
Still. It was really, REALLY
ing good.
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Isn't nature fascinating?
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Ahh we meet again, Church.
Will there be more or is this simply a one-shot?
it's ok, short, but ok. I give it a 5 out of 10 or a 3 out of 5
Hmm, not bad. It was good for clop's sake and I know you've grown as a writer since this. Good job overall for the first time.