I'm assuming this is going to be a chrysalis x human fic? There aren't enough of those imo....

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There will never be enough of those.

Lifting her head from her tray, i could see several drips of slop sliding down her muzzle

... You forgot to capitalize the I.

That's one way to pass the time.

Why are they in such inhumane conditions?

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Two tried to destroy Equestria and the other is the most powerful race ever seen.

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How would ponies know how powerful humans are. Besides that, a single, lone human (at least without any weapons) is not actually very powerful. Especially against a magic horse.

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Chyba że mamy odporność na magię