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Flutters Is Shy


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King Arthur, recently crowned, isn't quite ready to sit down for his reign, so Merlin decides to take him on an adventure to a land called "Equestria"
Here he will find the drive to be king, and lead his subjects with a kind and pure heart.

Edit, April 1st (but is not an april fools joke, I swear.) title card replaced
The wonderful title art comes from artist WhiteFangKakashi300

Here is a link to his Deviant Art page, give him some love, he deserves it! > http://whitefangkakashi300.deviantart.com/

Featured on October 23, 2015. Thank you guys so much for your support!

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 300 )

4004988
I think it was the one episode where they went to Asgard, right?

4005207 No, it's the one with Doctor Strange, where Nova's afraid of bunnies. As well he should be.

This is brilliant so far. Neat ref to Bedknobs and Broomsticks too.^^

Now add a hat and cape with a ton of bells and, Ta-Da, Starswirl the Bearded.^^

Leave to Merlin to get him and Arthur into trouble already. :rainbowlaugh:

4005543
I wonder if Twilight will make the same connection?~

4006848 Yes, hello to you too, I guess. I was really taking to the fic.

4006852
You seem odd. I like odd.
/me hugs you.

zel

I presume this is based on some sort of movie, not canon legend itself?

4006927
This takes place immediately after the events of Disneys The Sword in the Stone(1963)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l4ApRYUrqsQ
This is a link to the closest trailer I could find for it.

Disney's The Sword in the Stone crossover?!

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Just adored that movie as a kid.

Even that darn squirrel scene... :raritycry:

Will read as soon as the time isn't 'Get the f:heart:ck to bed!' a' clock.

>> Flutters is Shy

Indeed. I think I still have that movie on a VHS somewhere.^^

4007473
Please tell me what LOHAV is, so I can avoid doing something that might ruin my story.


4007473 4007507
Nevermind, after doing a bit of research I figured it out, and while I do enjoy those stories from time to time, you definitely wont be finding any "And then Jimmy woke up, and it turns out he was now a pony version of Merlin!" in this story.

Disney's Sword in the Stone crossover? :rainbowhuh:

That... makes so much sense. I mean you don't have to stretch at all to make this crossover work, Merlin is just that goofy and eccentric. Almost like what a reformed Discord should aspire to be.

I look forward to seeing where this goes.

MOAR
If you don't mind, that is...

4008831
I'm working on it, but I've re-written these last few paragraphs a couple times now, and I can NOT get the interaction between Arthur and this new character to be fluid. :fluttercry:

That movie is the DEFINITIVE representation of Arthur and Merlin for me. I'll definitely be giving this story a try just for that.

Can I get a source link for that cover art? If it's on DeviantArt I want to Favorite it.

4010309
I'm sorry, I used google to search for the picture, and as such the only link I have for it is to pintrest. On closer inspection of the picture, I was unable to find a signature.
http://www.pinterest.com/pin/154881674656218402/

I was expecting Merlin to be Starswirl the Bearded.

4012061
A really old magic using unicorn, with a long beard? who's to say somepony else wont come to that conclusion? :yay:

This is Awesome!! And I love the 'Bedknobs and Broomsticks' reference there [someone should do a fanfic on that too...hmmm :duck:].
Dang now I want to make the B&B crossover, I've had it in the back of my head for some time before reading this. I can just see it now...:pinkiehappy:

German Soilder: [*subtitles*] "That's a flying purple Unicorn!"
German Colonel: [*subtitles*] "Don't be stupid, unicorns don't exist."

4012543
Maybe I'll get on that as well, after I manage to finish this up in a year or so (half joke) I really need to watch it again, its criminal that I havent seen it in years.....:fluttershyouch:

4012556
Well okay then. I look forward to when you write that. Unless of course I decide to do it too. Lucky for me, I have a such a photographic memory, and having watched that movie so many times as a kid [seriously; I liked it more than Mary Poppins, another Disney film that had mostly live action with an animated sequence/collage, and had the same actor in it who did Mr. Brown], I don't really need to watch it [but I probably would anyways].

One of my favorite movies... THIS IS GOING TO BE AWESOME!!!!

I totally approve of Arthur and Merlin saving a filly from a monster right after coming to Equestria, hopefully they can make a good first impression after the Hydra fight.

4005543 I was just thinking the same thing. Or Merlin knew Starswirl and that's how he came to Equestria the first time. I can totally see the two of them drinking and causing bar fights, burning down things, and altering reality with their magic as they stagger home singing some drinking song.

Paragraphs are running together. Might want to go back and fix 'em, if I were you.

4013183 Well, I figure everyone will be to busy dealing with the Hydra to make impressions. Plus, there might be injuries to deal with, so after is probably the best time.

I really like this. I wonder if Twilight will mistake Merlin for Star Swirl the Bearded.

4014144
Hmmmm?!!? Twilight overreacting and mistaking someone for someone else?
Naaaahhhhhhhhh, thats COMPLETELY out of character.:twilightsmile:

Yay :yay: Awesome story!

And about the idra issue, there is only one hero that could save them...
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the sugar bowl :rainbowkiss:

So... I think that the idea of this is pretty cool but um... Could you try to use periods instead of run-ons? Also, I suggest to you that you read "The Once and Future King: The Sword in the Stone", the original story of King Arthur, before you go a make a story based on a movie. I beg of you, please read it before you carry on. If you can't find it anywhere, I can give it to you. The book was great (if you don't mind reading)! Dare I say better than the movie! Please read it if you have free time.

Now this is more like it! You have earned a Like and Favorite from me fine sir. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :pinkiehappy:

4016998
I have read "The Once and Future King" And while I appreciate your patronage and view on the subject, TOAFK was more of an epic, while the Disney movie was a fun little romp, with little going on in the way of progression. Without the three transformation sequences and the wizards duel, nothing really happened in the course of the movie. But I digress. The Disney version is an interpretation, as is most of thier most famous animated works. Not truly representative of the original work, besides the use of Names and certain story points. I fell in love once more with the characters as they were portrayed, not simply as "Arthur" and "Merlin", but as this young, naive little boy who had much to learn, and this kooky old wizard with aeons of knowledge, not really knowing how to get him to learn, and overall bumbling through it with an air of knowing what he's doing.
All in all, I find that THESE characters would interact much more fluidly with the world of Equestria, and will be able to take much more from it than the original characters would have.
Once more, I thank you, and hope that I do not disappoint you with the end product.

4014192

A rather promising beginning so far.

I'm a bit disappointed that Archimedes and his snark stayed at home, the first chapter feels more like a prologue to me since it has so much in common with the movie's ending...

But other then those rather minor things? Quite good. Keep it up.

Reading your story was fascinating. I hope you will continue to write more about Arthur's adventure in Equestria. I wonder if Merlin is...Starswhirl the Bearded? :rainbowderp:

You hit Merlin's personality from that movie perfectly! :moustache:

Wait, given Merlin's penchant for time/dimension hopping, is he Starswirl the Bearded?

4017785
I wanted Arthur from the start to have interaction with the mane six, which Spike comes along for the rise by default. And seeing as Spike is the default "snark" character of mlp, I didnt have much hope for myself when trying to craft "snarky" conversation between the two. So I, like the fraidy cat that I am, cut him out of the story as soon as I possibly could. :fluttershysad:

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