The best time of the week is always the weekend. Because during that time, I go to a special place where the stress just leaves me. I get to go to the house of a family friend. But, I felt like if I go without Derpy, I'll never be able to send her back to Equestria like she asked me to. She asked for my help, and I was going to give her just that. So, I asked mom if Derpy could come. Mom was reluctant at first, saying no because she was afraid I might do something stupid. I promised nothing would happen, and she said it was okay. So, I packed some clothes for me and her, and when Tyrone (the family friend) came, he picked us up. I let Derpy sit in the front while I sat in the back, which I hardly ever did, but Derpy said she'd rather sit in the back with me. So after much debating, she got her way and sat with me. I was using the iPad that belonged to Tyrone so I could work on a new story idea on fimfiction.net, and I got side-tracked and went to Valentine-crin's user page.
I typed in a comment, "Hey, what's up?" After a while, he replied. "Oh, what's up?" he asked. There's a reason we knew each other before this particular moment. I had asked if I could do a reading of one of his stories on YouTube, and he said yes (after asking which one I'd be reading). Then, we started chatting, and that's how I became a friend of his. So, anyways, he asked how I've been doing. I told him I was fine, then told him he was never going to believe who was with me. He asked, "Who?" I waited a few seconds to add suspense, and replied; "Derpy!"
"No way!"
"Yes way."
"How?" he asked. I told him about how she fell through the hole in an alleyway and how I found her and everything up to that moment. He asked me how she was doing, and I told him she was fine, and that she was right next to me. I then asked if he wanted to talk to her. He said yes, and I handed her the iPad. She said hi, and after about 5 minutes, I got the iPad back and sent him a reply that said, "Hey; wanna know a secret?" He said yes, and I told Derpy not to look. "I really like Derpy a lot. I try to make it obvious, but she doesn't seem to notice. And it sucks because I don't think she likes me back," I replied. Then Derpy asked me for the iPad. I shrugged and said, "Sure. Why not?" She told me not to look, and said to Valentine, "You gotta promise not to tell Ian; I really like him, and I'm not sure if he likes me back." Valentine responded after a few minutes, with a message that said, "...........try asking." She told him she would, and she told me I could open my eyes now. I took my hands out of the way and looked at her. She started to turn a crimson red around her cheeks as she asked, "do...do you like me?" I immediately knew what she meant. "With all my heart. I've had feelings for you even before I knew you existed. And ever since the events that occurred after you fell through that hole, it made my feelings stronger."
She looked at me and started to blink as tears formed around her eyes. She then tackled me with a hug and started kissing me all over my face. I laughed because the flurry of kisses tickled so much. She stopped after realizing she was smothering me, and I swear my eyes spun in circles like in the cartoons when Mickey got hit on the head. I shook my head and said, "Wow..." Derpy giggled as she crushed me in her embrace. She grabbed the tablet and said to Valentine-crin;
"...He likes me..."
She then added the flutteryay emoticon and tapped post comment.
awesome Music within us youre done with the 3rd chapter can't wait to read it.
THAT......................................... WAS .................................................. AMAZING I liked how there are recent events from you in real life unless wait is there something im missing
I found out what i was missing this is amazing though Ian amazing work
4036432 Thank you so much! I'm so glad I've gotten some feedback on this story. Usually, people don't comment or they do, but only tell me the cons of the story. Thank you and everyone else who's read this story.
Just a heads up, fellow Bronies, Pegasisters and just plain readers; These chapters will take longer to make due to other things that I'm recently doing. Between working with Vinyl and Octavia, being an editor, and making sure Derpy's mood swings don't end up killing or hurting anypony, I've got a lot on my hands. But, if Celestia can manage doing many things, so can I. Your fellow Brony, out.
-Ian DelValle.
(PS: ignore the fact that the website says I'm still online. I leave it open on my laptop so I don't worry about signing in. I do still remember my password of course, I just think it takes more time to sign in). I'm on the website from 6 to 10 PM.
4037866 whoa youre working on three differrents things that sounds difficult dude but you are so you can do it
4038244 you are a multitaskker. Ihate when I forget words
4037866 ill talk with you later okay arlound 6n or 7
One, I act oblivious to most girls that like me. Its kinda fun. But the problem is that most of them are slutish. So I so NOT want to do anything with them..
Two. Robot s ftw!!!
Tres. To short
I mean. Come on. Mouse SSHas more comment than words in this. ( jokingly)
4049861 I was actually oblivious to what Derpy's feelings were for me. Just saying.
And thanks for the feedback. I've been trying to get a hold of the people on this site who disliked the story to tell me what was bad about it. No luck so far. Finally, you come along and tell me what I did wrong. Thank you. May Celestia's light shine upon you, and as I say here and on YouTube; Keep Calm and Brony on!
......Heeeeeey.........I was there for that..Look Jackie ;D see!!! I am crazy!!
: Ah know yah are sugarcube...
hehe!! but ya love me regardless.
I refuse to believe a chat over this website could possibly happen within the duration of a car ride.