• Member Since 24th Feb, 2014
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VesternCiv


Dark, gory, fun, and cute - all in one!

Comments ( 21 )

Better late than never!

3999748 I only did it because you told me to. :pinkiehappy:

Oh come on, how can someone already rate this down, it's only been posted for 10 minutes. Nobody reads 21,000 words in 10 minutes. What a fraud. :raritycry:

Good story. :pinkiegasp: It really shocked me! But :flutterrage: The rage I feel I want to kill Applejack and Big Macintosh!!!!

3999836 Wow, you guys read fast! Thanks! :derpytongue2:

3999847 Your welcome. If you make a sequel. Can I kill Applejack and Big Macintosh please?

Well let's see if this is any good

The apples make the Joker look like a saint,

I just finished reading this and I've got to say it really good, it has just the right amount of gore and sadness to make it feel as if it had actually happened
I give it a 9.5/ 10

4000110 The Apple family makes Pinkamena Diane Pie from Cupcakes look like Fluttershy

...That was very dark and gruesome...yet I somehow enjoyed it...good job you did there with Applejack. Despite all the sick kills she did, still the best...so overall thumbs up.

I enjoyed this. :pinkiehappy:
Can you make a sequel to where Fluttershy (or whatever pony you want) finds the apple family?
I would love that.:derpytongue2:
I'll write a story for you in return if you'd like. :raritywink:

3999799 Butthurt much? Also, when I read the description, I couldn't help but ask myself, "Is this an alternate take on Sweet Apple Massacre?" Because nobody else asked. :eeyup:

4005836 This is an alternate take on The Texas Chainsaw Massacre - but with ponies in it. I thought I made that quite obvious. I've never read Sweet Apple Massacre so I don't know how the two stories compare. But if it involves Big Macintosh killing ponies with a chainsaw this is simply the result of both stories being based on the Texas Chainsaw Massacre as their titles suggest. :ajsmug:

Why is Sweet Apple Massacre popular but this isn.t?? It should really be vise-versa!! I enjoyed this story.

This good I liked this story alot why this not well liked i will never understand

5192143 not to sound funny but maybe people just don't like these kinda stories, so the dislike because it's not their cup of tea? Either way I like the story and is one of my favorites.

I bet they went to apaloosa!
And they are planning to find ms derpy and finish what they started, only after she has Macintosh's kid.

Fucked up man

"I'm going to fucking murder you!" cried Applejack as her mutilated shoulder gushed blood onto my hooves.

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