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Hesitant Brony


One story written, over a 100 stories favorited, and an ever growing number of interviews. I provide constructive criticism and laughs for the wonderful stories I read.

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A simple story of breakfast with the Apple family. Although Applejack just can't shake the feeling that something is wrong.


Written as part of my 100 favorite story challenge. This was my first fanfiction I've ever written. Now let's eat. [Proofread by smileyface1010]

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Comments ( 6 )

:rainbowlaugh:
That was funny! Good work.

This made me smile. :pinkiehappy:
Although, I've never cared much for that cereal myself... :ajbemused:
It must have sounded especially funny in your head if I found it to be this amusing in written form. :applejackunsure:
Thank you for writing! :twilightsmile:

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You all are too kind. Thanks for reading and commenting.
It's good to hear my first fanfic put a smile on some people's faces.
That's the best I could have ever hoped for. So thank you all again.

This was a wonderful story. Great job! ^_^

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