I write bad fanfiction, usually slice of life and comedy stuff. Deal with it.
Gravity Falls x MLP crossover!
Dipper and Mabel can't sleep one night, so they go take a walk in the woods. In the woods, they find a portal, and Mabel goes through it. Naturally, Dipper goes too. Hilarity ensues.
Takes place between Games Ponies Play and Magical Mystery Cure, and before Dreamscaperers. Set in Dipper's perspective. Additional tags will be added when relevant. If you think the rating should be changed or have ideas for the story, I'd love to hear it.
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Heyooooo!
I like the premise, because I'm a huge fan of Gravity Falls myself. However, there is one thing; Mable and Dipper have green eyes.
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While it is a good idea, and no Gravity Falls crossover has been completed yet, but there is a bit of work you could do:
Some better characterization, less clichés, a tad bit less detail...there's a lot, admittedly. However, it seems decent, so It earns a favorite from me. Just keep going, put some heart into your work, and you'll do fine.
4012584 Alex Hirsch himself said that they have brown eyes, and he's the creator of the show...
Brown eyes are canon.
4012632 Yeah, I'll admit it's a bit hard to avoid clichés with this type of fic. Just be glad that they haven't run into the Main 6 like most HiE fics do almost immediately. Mabel is suprisinghly hard to write for, as her unpredictable silly nature is, well, unpredictable.
Thanks for the advice, I may try to edit it to make the characterization better. I tend to be overly descriptive with my writing, that's something I need to work on. 
Mabel's a brony? New headcanon!
I have started on Chapter 3. Just keepin' you guys updated! I'll try to get it done ASAP!
4012714 I'm exactly the same, in all aspects. Maybe it's why I can find this stuff pretty easily. Still, it's pretty good.
Wow...I haven't seen a new episode from Gravity Falls forever! The season finale left off at such a cliff hanger...(THANKS A LOT, TV!!!!!) I'll read this later lol. Seems like a good read.
4013083 Your picture...
PLANK?
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You guys are awesome.
4013323 I remember that show... I didn't like it, but I remember it...
4013323 What is it, Plank?
...
Yeah, yeah he is.
...
Hahaaha! You always know how to make me laugh!
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The green is a side effect of her being as close to "drugged out of your mind" as you can get on Disney. ONWARDS AOSHIMA!
4012696 I blame the "drugs" she was on, then
4012756 Great idea, but everyone's right, you're getting lost in the details. Gravity Falls is more loose. Surprised at the Twins immediate cutie marks, thought they would have to meet up with the Crusaders first.
4013299 Waddles has been replace wonder how Carpet Diem would have played out if Soos swapped brains with Pinkie Pie instead?...
4013421 Favorite Plank moment was when the Jimmies went into Plank's "Owner's" house with Plank & he was stuck outside. The guys mess up the place, and Jimmy goes outside with Plank.
"What's going on in there?"
"..."
"They're doing what?!?"
Then Jimmy covers Plank's "mouth" to stop him from talking.
4015355 I miss "Ed, Edd, & Eddy". That show made me laugh all the time!
4015355 OH MY GOSH. I NEED TO GO EDIT THIS. THANKS FOR THE IDEA. Blank flanked twins lol.
That would make a great plot point! (pun not intended!) 
4015797 Don't mention it; glad to help!
4015803 Yeah, I edited that chapter now, it's all good. Next chapter: Sleepovers! Spa trips! And Dipper gets dragged along for it all!
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I'd cut out that bit about the tattoos since the cutie marks are now gone; other than that it looks great.
4015931 Well, crud. It seems I've forgotten a few things.
I'll get right on that, thanks for the heads-up. 
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Ed, Ed, and Eddy!
BBBBBBBBBEAUH.
4015355 I felt it like some kind of Bioshock Infinite meets Kingdom Hearts, but oh well.
4032169 Interesting analogy; defiantly one I wouldn't have thought of.
4016841 Um, that second "Ed" should have two D's (Edd).
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CONFOUND MY SPELLING MISTAKES.
4035667 Technically, if you had gotten it right, it'd have been spelled wrong.
Three things:
Fallout: Equestria movie: Yes, yes, so much yes!
It ain't spaghetti without tomato sauce.
Why would ponies say grace?
That is all.
4041108 They say grace to they're lord and savior Celestia the solar tyrant
Long live the Crystal Pony Empire!
4041108 I dunno. To thank Celestia for sunlight which makes the food grow?
Personally, I like a lot of details. But I need to see these spa-ified Dipper and Mabel
SIDE NOTE: Mabel no longer has braces as a result of, uh, magic. Yeah. Magic. Gravity Falls is a very odd place.
Plus, it'd be kinda hard to blend in with the ponies if you have braces, which nopony does. 
4049873 Ask and I shall draw.
The only problem is my lack of a scanner, so i have to take all of the photos of my drawings with my phone.
But, I will still draw it to the best of my ability, as fast as possible, and if anyone wants some art, I guess I'll draw some stuff for this story.
Chapter 4 is being written, although slowly, so I'll try to have it out within a week or two. 
EDIT: On an unrelated note, who here has figured out all of the cryptograms? PM me your answers.
4084183 ALSO. I swear to Celestia that I'm trying to get this done, I 've just been so stressed lately hehe.
4453085 good luck also if you want any help I can help.
(I am Mabel bound by my love of mlp and rainbows and Dipper bound by my brain)more please! Not trying to nag but this is too good.
(BILL CHIPHER POPS UP )HEY PINE TREE
LYRA: I THOUGHT YOUR NAME WAS DIPPER
DIPPER :IT IS
MORE!!
