Hearts and Hooves day is a week away, and Luna is depressed about it. But when the Lunar goddess meets a mare that turns out to be an outcast Chrysalis feeding off love from the holiday. but Luna sees past the former changeling queens hard exterior, and the two fall for each other. there is only one question left, how are they going to make the world understand she isn't a monster?
Authors note: i switch POV's (Points of view) constantly throughout this story, deal with it, i like to cover more ground in the eyes of the characters.
Chapters (1)
You need some help with read ability and grammar.
Editor or BETA could help with that
Do you think you could add in some tabs at the beginning of paragraphs and some more breaks in some of the longer paragraphs, without them this is hard to read.
GAH! I need more pages!!! ;-;
This is really well done.. Perhaps a little fast but at the same time its still good and peeks my intrests... I hope to see more soon... 
please more? this looks really promising, and you and i both know how hard it is to find a luna x chrysalis fic on here.
somebody get a doctor... this fic is to good to die...
5558973 i doubt the author will continue it. Authors always seem to abandon chrys/Luna fics.
5605961 yeah we may need a necromancer in hindsight. seems most chrysalis x anything seem to have bad endings or more specifically not have an ending and just sit uncompleted...
5606383 A necromancer? Pfft I think we need another author to pick up this story(if its okay). I think this was capable of more views. I also have a question, what do you think of the story LoveBug (celestial/chrys). I totally thought it had a good ending :3
5606768 that could work as well i suppose and you're right this story definitely deserves more than its getting. Also i have not yet seen love bug though i believe it is on my read later, would you recommend it
Ps. We should probably switch to personal message system soon so as not to irritate the author with our conversation