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Good luck buddy! I've really enjoyed working on it with you and I like it, so hopefully others will be just as entertained.
I haven't the slightest clue who's interested in this, but if you like the story, chapter two will be up on
the 29thJuly 1st. We'll pretend that didn't happen.Just reading the prologue, I find this to be a very interesting read. I'll definitely be checking out the next chapter.
Ooh! I like the character development in this chapter. At first, I thought Failsafe was a rather flat character, but it appears that he has more dimensions than I originally thought. Can't wait for more.
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Oh, good. I was worried that 'douchebag' wasn't a good-enough character trait. Glad to see his other side isn't COMPLETELY invisible for the moment. Thanks for the read, sonny-boy!
If anyone, and I do mean anyone views the story past this point and reads this comment, let this be out in the open.
I've had an extremely bad attitude toward writing this story. I've said it before and I'll say it again; I like feedback. When I don't get feedback, I get pissy. And I understand that what I am saying will come off whiny and absolutely childish, but I feel pretty unfairly ignored in terms of this story.
I have no right to complain about that, I know, but that's the curse with being a completely unknown entity on this site. This is feeling like more of a tedious second job than the therapeutic experience it started out as, and I don't like that. Until I can approach this story and how I write it with the attitude I originally had, I won't upload anymore.
Until then, thank you for reading and goodbye for now.