• Member Since 21st Feb, 2014
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Pimped Kiwi

Rainbow Dash is best pony :3


Soarin never really had any problems with getting mares to fall for him but when Hearts and Hooves day comes around he decides that he would rather be alone then with some random fan mare until he meets a familiar face while on vacation in Ponyville.

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 43 )

Let's see how it turns out. :eeyup:

I LOVED it1:pinkiehappy: The chapters were just the right length! Not too short as to make it not interesting, but not too long as for it to be dull

:rainbowderp:That was........AWESOME!!!!!!!!!:rainbowdetermined2::rainbowlaugh:
I see you are trying to keep rainbow in character, but maybe you should make it like she has no idea that it's a date and she just thrilled to be will a wonderbolt. that would put Soarin in an odd spot.:scootangel:

Nice job so far with this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Best of luck.

Why did Soarin forget Dash? :rainbowhuh:

Almost finished with the third chapter, should be up by the end of this week :) hope you guys enjoy /)

Nice story. Seems pretty rushed to me though. :eeyup:

Good story, I would like to know more detail about Soarin and Rainbow dash's activities during their date. All knit picking aside, a good read.:heart::twilightsmile:

Great Chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Best of luck.

Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

2 Words to say: SWEET & :yay:

4255405 Yeah, don't worry I haven't abandoned the story, it's just hard to find time to write right now :/ A new chapter will be out by the end of the month :D

Awesome I love this story.

4288491 Thanks :D glad you like it

I must say, this is a great story...
A little bit rushed though, but do not let my idiotic critiques stop you.

I really like it! Please write more soon!!!:pinkiehappy:

Nice chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Don't keep us waiting too long.

Why do I think Dashie's out of character xD

But I wanna see how this turns out :D

Cool chapter:twilightsmile:
Can't wait for the next one:twilightsmile:
P.s I hope soarin actually moves a mountain :twilightsmile:

I love this chapter as much as the first!
that is saying something.:heart:

Amazin' I must say... hmm...

Love the story so far keep going PLZ... :)

Cant wait till the next one! :rainbowkiss:

I love how you kept all of the characters (especially Spitfire) in character!:heart:

Yeah, I agree with TheProfessor04! Dashie just seems a little too dependable when she falls head over hooves for Soarin. I was expecting her to just act kinda laid back and cool when Soarin asked her on a date :moustache:. I still really liked it!

Great work! Seems a bit rushed, but great work!

Lookin' forward to the next chapter! I wanna know what's next, so don't take TOO long!:heart:

I Love this story!!!!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I love this chapter.:twilightsmile:
I can't wait for more. :pinkiehappy:

Rainbow did another Sonic Rainboom but when Soarin did it I don't know what to call it. Also my rating: :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:&:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

love for the handsome, down-to-earth stallion who stole her heart.

One word for me right now: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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