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The cake twins have always been my most favorite foals in the whole wide world!

Their parents were always SOOO busy, so I constantly played with them, and entertained them. We all had fun when I was in charge!

Lately, Mrs. Cake has been feeling sick. Guess what, she BIT Mr. Cake! Can you believe that? And Mr. Cake is sick now, too! Now the foals are all scared! But as their unofficial aunt, I will protect them no matter what.

I won't let harm ever come to them.

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Cool, finally a good zombie fic to read, keep up the good work :D

moar. I think it went to fast, but otherwise good work.

so was she pinkamena all the way through that? :pinkiecrazy:

They're parents were always SOOO busy

*their :facehoof:

4462159 She's always Pinkamena

Hannah is indeed better than Kim...

But Clem is better than Lee.

What if Pinkie becomes Carol? :pinkiecrazy:

Just a thought...

4462284 :facehoof: I hate it when this happens… I'll fix it.

4462334 You are awesome.

4462858 So are you...

As well as Wuna.

4462357 I wanna say…Carol is from the walking dead show?
(Played both games, but haven't seen the show.)

'Twas a good read!
So what's with the random Hannah is better than Kim? (I know who the Yogscast are)

4463003 Dunno. Just felt it needed said. Also, I never know what to put at the end of these stories.

4462878

Yeah, she's from the show. WARNING: SPOILERS AHEAD:


She is the kind of person who considers the "greater good" over the good of the few- such as kill the flu victims to save the group, or shoot the disturbed little girl to protect everyone else. That role takes a huge toll on her, as seen in S4 "The Grove", but it's a vital role.

I could see Pinkie filling that role. Also... Scootaloo as Carl. Can you see it?

4463148 I hadn't actually considered this being a series. Maybe, if people want it. And I'm really sorry, but all I know about Carl is that he's the main character's son. If this was a series, I would most likely make more references to the game than the show. :derpytongue2:

(I don't know why, but my dad actually prefers my love of the swear-filled, bloody game instead of the show.)

4462005 Not related to anything you just said or the story:ajbemused: but, "I like trains". :scootangel:

4463184 because the game is fucking awesome:
Clem: "that's a salt lick, but don't lick it, it's gross!"
Lee: "did you lick it?"
Clem: "......... I don't know?"

4464944 Clementine's cuteness deducts 20 sins from this game!
~Gaming sins guy.

4465054 ducks general annoying as fuckness adds a billion sin points, but it's ok cause you get to shoot him. (I hated duck)

4464944 Oh Clementine. Just to adorable.

4464690 Ha Ha Ha, yes you do.

4462034 I did make a sequel, if you want to read it.

A great story to read! I had fun reading it. Keep it up!

This was wonderful! Can't wait to read the others!

What is a self conscious?
Are you sure you're not thinking of the subconscious?
Actually, even if you were I think another name might be better to make her seem 'Pinkie' (Good job on that, by the way. Love how you did her voice) - maybe her mini-self? Her happy voice? No, those make her seem a bit crazier than she is.
Just throwing ideas out.

Also, I have almost no context whatsoever. In medias res is a wonderful thing, but only if we eventually learn more so that I can sympathize. Perhaps you do it better in other chapters, but as of yet the only reason to be interested in this is the fact that it's based on the walking dead and has Pinkie in it. Which is fine, but it doesn't hold up on its own.

5221764 It probably was more like a sub-conscience in the long run. I was thinking of Adventure Time when I wrote this, surprisingly, and that kind of gave me the idea for it.

i can't believe mr and mrs cakes got bit! :fluttercry: hannah is better at the walking dead than kim tho i know you're right

5222798
*primes the world's nuclear arsenal for firing*Give me the word, and I'll blow these undead fucks to kingdom come.

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