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Grape Crush


I hear marshmellows don't grow on trees, how sad.

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The Wasteland, a horrible, cruel, and unforgiving land. The ponies that make up this dark and cruel place only make it worse.
My name is Shadow Wind. I came out here, out of the safe stable, to make a difference, to better things. The system sucked me in and didn't intend to let me go. But intend to beat the system, show them the error of their ways. Cleansing is needed, and forever after I will live as...

The Shadow.

I've heard a lot of talk about virtues. It hurt me that I could never find mine, I felt like that was the only thing keeping me from breaking down and giving up... That sweet day I learned what I was born for, that's why I do what I do.

(Takes place in Kkat's world of Fallout: Equestria. However, the wasteland was never cleansed. However, mentions to Security or the Stable Dweller will be made. I do give thanks to Kkat for making this wonderful world for all of us to play in!)

Well would you look at that, some art with Shadow in it. Thank you so much to spongebob1000 for bringing his work to the table.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 30 )

Thanks for adding your story to the Fallout Equestria Group! Hope it helps your story get more views!

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Actually, I think I read somewhere it's "markspony" in general, but I can't give you proof of that

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Would Marksmare still be acceptable?

4161932
Oh, ok. Well, I'm going to I back to brainstorming ideas for next chapter, I'm only 1.6k words in.

So, I finally came around to read your story.
And I like it very much. Pacing and spacing are well done, grammar and spelling are good.

And I like pegasi.

There's only one small flaw the first chapter: When she gets captured this happens a bit too fast.
For the future: At least do your *** *** *** that indicates a gap or let her be knocked unconscious. Being captured and tied up by bandits is nothing you should just skip. And Shadow wasn't just sitting there letting it happen, was she?

But apart from that, I liked the story very much. How is chapter two going?

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I apologize for not getting back to you. A family emergency has come up and I have been trying to clear it up, but that leaves me very little time to do anything. It is coming along, but at a very slow pace. About the story, I apreciate what you said, it means a lot.

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Not answering immediately doesn't hurt anyone.:scootangel:

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So, since everyone doesn't read my blog posts and you're pretty much the only person to show interest so far I might as well tell you. I am 7k words in, and wait for it, I got some cover art. So yeah, wondering if I should put it on now or wait until chapter 2 is posted, what's your vote?

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You can add your coverart whenever you want. There's no reason to wait for the next chapter.

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Looks like it won't be going anywhere, the file exceeds 1mb.

4318628
I had the same problem. What format is the picture? JPGs are bigger than PNG ones. My first try to upload an cover art was 2Mb. So try and transform the format, it may help.

4318648
Nah, I still couldn't get it below 1mb even with changing it from a JPG to a PNG, ugh, my artist worked forever on that... Well, I'm going to go see if he can somehow make it smaller or something.

4318759
I think if you downsize the picture it gets smaller too. What size is it anyway?

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How exactly do you downsize an emailed image? Isn't it set to the size that the sender sent it as?

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You open it using e.g. Paint, then there should be a button saying something like "adjust/change size". There you can change the size of the picture and save it as an PNG or something else.

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I got it, thank you so much. And there you go, some cover art with Shadow in it. :pinkiehappy:

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Glad I could help. :twilightsmile:
Nice coverart btw. I wish I had an artist like that.

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Yeah, I'm not sure my artist is up for anymore work... That background took him... 3 months I believe and it was his first time drawing with ponies. But all in all, it turned out quite nicely!

Good work bro.

I'll give it a thorough review tonight.

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