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A pool boy by trade. A rocker at heart. A writer by soul. And not afraid to show my face.


As a queen, I never once considered the thought that I would have the authority to facilitate a true marriage. But, for this pony I have found, I have become her last desperate hope.

Her soon-to-be wife is dying... and this is her final wish.

I will gladly oblige.

Everfree Northwest Contest Entry

This is a tie-In story to my other contest story Our Voices Carry Through The Hills, though this story can stand on its own.

WARNING: If you are reading the other story, this one contains spoilers! Read at your own risk!

Enjoy! :twilightsmile:

Thanks to LightningBass94 for prereading!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 30 )

Interesting especially that cryptic ending


Amazing, simply amazing.:pinkiehappy:

4019280 I'm so glad you think so! :pinkiehappy:

Awesomeness of the awesome! :twilightsmile: Dunno what else to say? Ummm
Best tie in of the year ^^:heart:

4019999 Just as I had hoped!! :twilightblush: I just hope now that the judges will like it.:derpytongue2: Thank you!

I thoroughly enjoyed this. It is a welcome change from other fanfictions I have been reading. I thank you for the good read my good author.

4020647 No need to thank me! I should be thanking you for reading it!:rainbowdetermined2:

wow, out of all the entries to this contest i've read, this is the best one... and the only one. surry you are amazing, don't ever stop.

4023203 You're really too kind.:pinkiesmile: But thank you so much!! :raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry:

You and me Surry, we've got this in the bag man! :raritywink:

Excellent my friend, simply excellent.

4025184 I know, right?! We're shoe-ins!! :rainbowdetermined2::pinkiehappy:

IT's so well done! Sad too, but well done!

4031652 Thank you for the kind words. :twilightsmile:

I love it. It really ties in well with Our Voices (rest of title here).

Author Interviewer

I feel like there's just a bit missing from the end that would make it slightly less confusing. I mean, there's obfuscation and then there's leaving things out, unless I've missed something, which is entirely possible.

4039511 Sorry, it's a tie-in to my other story which I linked in the description. That's why it's kinda vague at the end. :twilightblush:

Author Interviewer

Not a great idea for a contest entry. :B Will have to check that out, though.


Not a great idea for a contest entry.

We'll see. :trixieshiftright:

Just remembered to read this, and I gotta say................wow. I feel so bad for wishing harm on Lady now. Even after the most recent chapter of Our Voices, I still was angry at her. Now, I just want to find her an bring Lily back to her.:pinkiesad2:


I feel so bad for wishing harm on Lady now.

That's only gonna get worse. :fluttershyouch:

4046926 .....much, much worse! :fluttercry:

I just realized this actually goes 8 words past the limit. That's most likely my fault. :twilightsheepish:

As someone not familiar with the other story that this may reference, I find the vague mentioning of what Chrysalis did to help the mare a second time rather confusing. For a stand-alone story to be out of context of another story, I think stopping it at around this spot would have been fine:

...and not with my own distorted version of the emotion.

I think that would have worked better considering the word limitations. Either that, or a little bit more of an explanation of that second half; it is so vague that it kind of brings enough questions to distract from the beauty of the occasion that was the main point of the story.

Excellent imagery, btw.

4142975 Duly noted.

Ha! Oh, this is so strange! My friend Strythio sent me to this fic a few days ago, and I just read your story, "Princess Luna's Far-Out Casks And Clovers Day" and I thought to my self, 'this writing seems familiar.'

I found out why. :twilightblush:

4159909 Yeah, this wasn't one of my better ones. :facehoof:

:rainbowlaugh:Haha... Oh, your serious...:rainbowderp:
I don't know what your talking about, it is much better than mine!
He sent me to this fic saying that he liked it, so no worrys!:twilightsmile:

4161239 I just... didn't execute it very well. :applejackunsure:

The only part I had a problem with was the same as Strythio.
But that just gives me another reason to read your other fics! :pinkiehappy:

4161270 well that's good to hear friend. I just meant for this one to be a tie-in and nothing else.

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