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Scarheart


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The lone surviving child of Queen Chrysalis, Princess Pupa lies in a comatose state, having been savagely beaten by her mother. Her dreams are nightmares as she is haunted by the vision of her mother hating her. Pupa, an innocent child of a simple mind and malformed body comes to the attention of one Princess Luna, the Mare of Dreams.

As her sister attempts a direct approach through the filly's mother, Luna acts in her own subtle ways. Seeking out across the vast and unimaginable possibilities the World of Dreams offers, she finds a stalwart companion to help protect Pupa's shattered dreams. Silent Wing, his own body shattered in an effort to protect somepony he cares for is also in a coma.

Luna proves dreams can go beyond realities and that family doesn't need to be blood.

A collaboration between myself and MagicMan. This is not meant to be a stand-alone story as readers would understand better if they read the other stories.

Pupa is based off the character from Maternal Instincts and is supposed to take place while she is in a coma. Silent Wing, ironically is also in a coma, as noted in The Chimera.

I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!

Rated Teen for some disturbing scenes.

MLP:FiM is owned by Hasbro.
MLP:FiM was created by Lauren Faust.
Princess Pupa is MagicMan's OC.
Silent Wing is my OC.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 17 )

Arrggghh!!!!! Someone get a human doc to try and fix this poor little changeling's medical issues. Then deliver her to Cerci or to Fluttershy, STAT!

... want to help the poor little thing! :fluttercry:

3951487 Well, it picks up right here before the end of this chapter.:twilightsmile:

I actually had this written since Christmas weekend last year, but it languished on my editor's desk while he was out with a sickness. Magic Man and I went over it a few times and we're both satisfied with the end product.

I hope you enjoyed it! :pinkiesmile:

All my yes to this...But before I start it...where does it start? Before or after the original fic with puppa or it is a stand alone

3951714 You can place this part of the story about the time she's placed in the hospital. If you want to see it as a stand-alone story, it might be confusing for those who are unfamiliar with the origins of the characters. Hence, I linked both stories.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!:twilightsmile:

(chapter two for NMoO might be done tonight, btw).

I'll link you the chapter if you like.

Hah that was very clever crossficover (?)
Interesting idea but I though there will be more about that dream itself I had felling like half of fic was just very big introduction

3954282 Yeah, I probably should have toned down the intro a bit...:facehoof:

3954381
More like make more stuff in dream ;p

3954397 Well...that's really up to Magic Man...he's also the co-author and Pupa is his little OC. Throw a note on his page if you like. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by White Wolf deleted Mar 19th, 2014

Great story, man. I wanna see Silent Wing to go Pupa's mom and smack the shit of out her in person, Godzilla style.

I'm not going to read this, as I couldn't get into 'Maternal Instincts' (I tried to read Magic Man's fic but I gave up...).

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

4577732 No worries. Not every reader can be pleased and I respect that.:twilightsmile:

Oh my goodness this is fantastic. I actually cried liquid towards the end. Its really sweet C: I like the way everything fits into the original story by magic man. Maternal Instinct was one of the first and one of the best fanfics I have ever read and this is just perfect. However, I dont understand the part about the dragon. Could you please tell me more about that?

6731129 Silent Wing has his own story. The dragon mentioned is in The Chimera.

Great story. I assume she wakes up in thw other diminsion. I belive this is part of the maternal instinct verse.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/66500/maternal-instinct

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