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River Road


Writing Comedy, Adventure and Slice Of Life. Desperately trying to keep up with all the crazy stories my brain comes up with.

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This story is a sequel to A Crystal Heart


Everypony knows the story of how the changelings under Queen Chrysalis tried to take over Canterlot. But in reality, Queen Chrysalis doesn't exist, and the invasion was intended to fail right from the start.

Things are not always like they seem, especially when they're staged by one of Canterlot's prime actresses and illusionists.


This story might be a little confusing, so if you feel like you're missing something important, feel free to look up the info page.

Set in the CrystalVerse.

This story is my entry to the contest on MLPchan about rewriting episodes from the show. However, the truth is that I've been wanting to write this for over five months before the contest gave me the final motivation.
I wrote this story for myself, not for the contest.

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Comments ( 13 )

I would have never expected anything less from you River. This was another incredible story! Loved every second of it!
The story was exciting, interesting and had some pretty awesome characters! :heart:

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The story is not just based on A Canterlot Wedding, I literally copied the transcripts and the episodes word by word for most of it, then gave a new interpretation for it.
Maybe it doesn't always seem to make sense, but it's the only reasonable explanation I have for the invasion. They pretended that the changelings were defeated for good, so that they could continue their lives in Canterlot in piece.

Maybe I should go over the story one more time to see if I can make that more clear.

Edit: Made some edits, I hope it's a little clearer now.

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I made a FAQ for questions like this. Let me know if it leaves anything else open.

So, just read it. Yeah, three years later and all that jazz. Anyway, sequel when? :pinkiehappy:

Oh, and have a fave and a like. You deserve it, and this was a rather interesting premise :yay:

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Oh boy, that was so long ago. :twilightsheepish:

Technically, the next sequel would be the first crossover story I wrote that shows her breaking out of prison. :scootangel:

8165352 The One Piece one with Sanji, or another one? Wasn't that before? Is Crystal a main character? :derpytongue2:

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That one, yes. Crystal is a side character in that one, because they didn't just put her in any old prison.

8165403 gotta give it a read later, then. Still would like to see it in her dedicated point of view. And the aftermath of this one, in how it affects ponies and changelings alike.

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