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My Little Dashie by ROBcakeran53 is without a doubt the most beautiful fanfiction I have ever read. I got very teary eyed at the ending and had the urge to write an alternate, happier ending. I know it can't possibly live up to the emotional and heart wrenching ending the author first wrote, but it helps keep me sane.

Original story here: http://robcakeran53.deviantart.com/art/My-Little-Dashie-260443804

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Feels like the original guy wrote it.
still made me (nearly) tear up.
So convenient for him though, he barely gives up anything.

I think you did a good job maintaining the narrative voice, although I still prefer the original and more soul-crushing ending, ha ha.

Beautiful. I wouldn't have been able to tell the difference. I daww'd. :)

#5 · Oct 26th, 2011 · · ·

Wouldn't have been simpler make him a pegasus? Maybe not.

I liked it and it really is good, but Sigh, another story that portrays humans as corrupted monsters. read "Heroes and Allies"for an alternative view. We're not perfect, but human-pony coexistence is possible!

that was beautiful thank you.:pinkiesad2:

#8 · Nov 19th, 2011 · · ·

Some people needed the happy ending.
Well done, I would have thought that you were the original author.

I however cannot accept it as the ending.

I have now witnessed the Best you "Bronies" have to offer, And it is ok.


(insert lack my of soul comment below)

#9 · Nov 22nd, 2011 · · ·

Now THIS was the kind of happy ending I needed. Thank you so much!

At first I thought you couldn't change the original but after readen this I found out that you can this was a job well done:twilightsmile:

#11 · Dec 2nd, 2011 · · ·

Like Rainbow Dash And Sweetie Belle Said...............

OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That Was Such A Sweet Story!!!!!!!!!!

18371 This story didn't portray humans as corrupted monsters the other ponies were just nervous of him at first.

And also Im now reading Heros and Allies now and you're doing a good job on it so far.

Thank you I needed this ending.

This ending is not as good as the original but this ending to me is more realistic then the other because I don't think Celestia is that cruel to separate him from Rainbow Dash after raising her for 15 years.

#14 · Dec 6th, 2011 · · ·

thanks for this ending,thanks...

this really cheered me up. thank you

I feel so much better after reading this. :fluttercry: At least :trollestia: had a heart behind that pompous shell.

Yay :D I'm glad I could cheer some people up after the soul crushing ending of the original xD

Damn that Tyrant, damn her to boot camp!

FUS RO DAH!!!!!!!!!!!!

:fluttercry:

I'm so glad for this.

Thank you.

And they all lived happily ever after. :twilightsmile:
I'm glad you had the heart to provide an alternate ending. Of course, while I'm reluctant to stray from the original ending, this one had just as much of an effect on me. Thank you.

I feel better now!
Thanks for the great ending!

I alot better now!
Thanks alot for the great ending!

I loved it and still crying my eyes out :fluttershbad:

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agreed. it's too straight forward and it's too short.

Sweet; not heart-wrenching like the other one but also not having as much of an impact. c:

Still, nicely written! ^w^

meh the original was great, sure i didn't cry nor did i tear up, but it was a good balance of sadness and hope.

this seems to counteract the authors original intent to make a fic that is pretty depressing, this seems a tad too happy. Mind you not perfect by happy.


-insert heartless basterd insults about me below-

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You have saved my life! I would end up not sleeping again if I kept on feeling "soul crushed" after the original ending. I, too, am now sane. I would appreciate it if you continued this for a while, just to keep it going.

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But you know, I did like the original ending better, Shocking as it seems

I really enjoyed the ending you made. It wasn't as strong as the original, but in some way it was more fitting than the original because I just couldn't see Celestia being that cruel to permanently separate them without any form of contact.

Oh. My. God. FOR THE LAST TIME [FIMFiction in general], PONIES. HAVE. HOOVES. NOT ARMS AND LEGS!

Thank you for this. I really needed that happy ending.

This alternate ending was great.
It did feel like the original author wrote this so thats good.
But the only problem that I didnt like was he was still human.

Wouldn't this have sort of put the narrator at odds with Rainbow Dash's real parents? I can't be the only one thinking that they're worried sick that she's calling HIM dad instead of her ACTUAL dad. :moustache:

Thank you sir. I can't stand sad endings.

Beautifully done.:pinkiesad2:

Oh my gosh I needed this after reading the original and an alt ending that was even sadder. good work cheering people up. :pinkiehappy:

Zooty congratulations you made a mld story that doesn't have celestia be a complete trol:trollestia: did someone say troll:ajbemused: NO

Thank you so much!

Aww...
Good job. :heart:

poor guy can't date....or can he? No in all seriousness this was great. I loved the original and the original is still better because of the sad ending that's what made My Little Dashie, My Little Dashie. But I would've loved this ending as well

Thank you so much for this ending I couldn't stop crying at the original one I thought my life had ended as I knew it because it was so sad.

383655 Poking holes in logic, what fun! :facehoof:

Both endings are like the yin ang yang.

A great story and much better ending! Now if only someone could make a story about his new life in Equestria

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