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For her to love me.

On valentines night, Rainbow Dash crashes into the library and asks Twilight if she felt the same way, not letting her answer she kissed the alicorn and everything fell apart after that, nothing was going as she hoped it would, or as expected.

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dream1990

dream1990 #1 · Feb 15th, 2014 · 1 · ·

yay i am glad someone made a story of a twidash sfm it is was a cute video please make more chapters for this story

Golden Diamond

Golden Diamond #2 · Feb 16th, 2014 · · ·

Dat authors note. I'm sorry but I'm disobeying it.
This story could use some work. Not mean and not really constructive but still criticism.

fire_fly808

fire_fly808 #3 · Feb 16th, 2014 · · ·

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No it's just I hate constructive citizisms because most people only say the negatives and I also hate the fact that people kinda just pick at things like the grammar and stuff, I know it's important I'm not saying that I thinks is dumb people would complain about a story that has sentences like: twilight waked up too see 5 small minni baby flys. "aw cute she said.
But I mean I know I'm not great with their there and stuff and there might be a few misspelt words because of auto correct, ya in write on my iPad. I just hate how people complain if there is a few mistakes but I also know I'm not a great great writer, I just want people to talk about the story not the punctuation and grammar mistakes unless it was like the example above but I don't write like that

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