Spike has made it to 17, a time when a colt becomes a stallion, at least for ponies. The same goes for our Dragon as he realizes what being a man truly means. After an altercation during his Birthday, spike will face his fate and possibly his doom at the hooves of a dark, and demented tyrant. It will be up to him to protect Twilight, to be her Guardian in the upcoming war against the shadows....
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Chapters (3)
and the party man discord shows up
Spoilers...
Got to say, you have a great story here. You have already drawn me in and have my dying wanting to know what is next. I hope they don't beat around the bush "too" much. I mean it is clear they have feeling for each other (it should be to the both of them) lol.
3949015 Thanks man, it won't be as beat around the bush as spike has confused feelings. It gets much more complicated fairly soon. So thank you for the follow, sit tight and I hope you enjoy the ride!
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Good start though.
"claps slowly and happily"
I am very intrigued in this story so far,
the moments were good, the characters are very good to read off of,
and the emotions and scenery are just.............................wonderful,
I await what else you write, and hope that I would be of some assistance if you need it!!!!!
Also, Spilight, calling it!!!!!
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Thank you I'll fix that right away, just let me know any and all mistakes. 
3949823 I could use an editor, as soon as I publish to just let me know any mistakes so as to clean it up, I look for any and all positive criticism and critique!
and maybe...
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Sure thing dude!!!!
This story is very good, you have my attention. I sincerely hope that is a Spilight and not only a reference, because there are not many stories of this couple.
In regard to criticism, the truth I found good, for my part not found errors and the way in which detailed the scene I really like, and I hope that all your chapters are long like this.
I hope the next chapter you won a follower.
Best regards.
I am sorry if there is something confusing is that I use the Bing translator for reading and writing since English is not my native language.
I probably missed something but you said Spike will never grow wings. Whats up with the picture then?
3955228 Just wait.... all will be revealed
3955323 Well, you definitely convinced me to read on
3951804 Don't worry about it man, I do appreciate your comment and yes this will be a spilight, or will it be sparity???? You will just have to find out.... mwahahaha
p.s. your right, there are not enough Spilight fanfics out there
3947634 Man let me in suspense like that with the fourth season, waiting to see if Mr generic (Flash sentry)
comes out to literally kill the personality of twilight as in the film...
Well I hope, a request if you want to accept it, and even if this story is a spilight is that you can develop the relationship. In my opinion relationships romantic who take long and has several indirect moments throughout the story to make it more attractive.
Well in my opinion greetings
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Can't wait for the next chapter 
4057315 Thank you so much, and thank you for the fav!
I like this chapter, I always thought Spike and Discord would make good friends lol. One thing that has been bugging me that I've now seen again is that it is always Rarity deciding if she "wants" Spike. I mean she acts like there is noway anyone else could win his heart from her or that he would slowly become tired of chasing her. I mean I know he has chased her for a long time but even so he is a great guy does she really think noone else will see that and try to win his heart lol. Idk that is just what has been on my mind. Anyway great work really enjoyed this chapter can't wait to see what the major conflict will be.
4057408 part of that "He will only love me" is going to be a key plot device in the oncoming chapters, trust me and I am going to make it work
4057461 K i trust you dude, you haven't let me down yet
. It is just funny I do love the Rar and Spike combo true as the day is long. But I just can't shack that feeling I get where Rarity is always like "I will always have Spike if I chose too" and I'm like really!? lol
. That is why I love your Twi to be honest, she really love Spike and want to be with him dragon or not, but she struggles with her own self worth which is her biggest road block to getting Spike. I like that aspect.
you mispelled "mazel tov" [מזל טוב]
Hmm..I'm liking this so far, I'll look to updates in the future.
4057726 thanks man, I hope to not let you down
4057585 Thank you!
W-wow... you have some serious writing skills no doubt about that! I got instantly hooked, loved the first chapter even though some scenes were a little cliche its still greatly described!
So far I'm enjoying this story, keep it up!
Yes, the second chapter also pleases me, you have earned favorite from me
4058774 thanks man, I just hope that I can continue to please
4058778 You are doing exceptionally good, its hard to believe that this is your first fic it seems to be very well written, the characters are in their respective personalities and fancy descriptions are where they are needed.
I'm looking forward for more updates and I guess there will be a lot of them seeing this build up till now.
Another amazing chapter man, well worth the wait I might add.
You have still some small grammatical errors in there, but other than that, great job, and please make sure that you take your time in order to make each chapter grand and awesome!!!!!!!!
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I like the sound of this. Hell, it seems like Rarity is unaware that Spike has an all-mare fanclub now. I'm looking forward to any and all freakouts.
4058925 thanks man, if you can, message me any and all corrections. I did ask if you could act as a proofreader for me
and I will do everything to put my best into every chapter
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Sure, ill get right on it
Finally a new chapter that emotion
I agree with neizd have long tanlento to write. Conciderando this your first fic have many good things, for example.
The chapters are long and detailed.
You have a strong argument and also as you said Neizd you're true to the personality of the characters.
You create situations that are not tired and also that are well written. I almost fall of laughter with the scene of Discord and I loved when Spike choose the party that originally Twilight prepare for the. It made me very tender and is something that would happen in the series knowing how it is twilight.
And how to forget it has my favorite couple. I hope that it is the official
Well I hope that the next chapter this soon.
Again sorry if it sounds weird things since I use a translator to read and write since I don't speak English.
oooooooooooohhhh
im sooooo excitec for the next chapters
i reeeaaaally want to know what this nightmares mean
yay :D Dislestia is best shipping
Hmm, strange dragon face silhouette in the moon... I wonder what it could be...
You've got a great start to your story, and I eagerly await the next chapter!
Man just went back and reread this story. And I have to admit I am loving the idea of your Spike x Twilight even more then before. She is just to cute and would be perfect for him in more then one way. And I really at this point in time don't like your Rariy how she talks abot Spike's feelings like they are some accessory that she has to decide if she wants to wear or not. This Spike is way to good to hook up with her. There is noway she would care for him as much as Twilight in this story would.
4468703 there is a reason i am setting it up this way. and than you so much. I'm soooo sorry its taking so long for chapter three. Its mostly written, but senior year has been a bitch to be honest. Wont have to worry about it any more after this weekend though. HUZZAH!
stay tuned my friends!
4468906 Dont worry I am a fan of your work so I wont be going anywhere. I am dying to see where this is going. Don't remind me of senor year. I am just happy I skipped a grade so i got out of there faster lol.
Personally I don't like spilight, I mean I really REALLY don't like spilight
and normally I would stop reading but I can't sense this is really Really REALLY good story 
so yay you got me hooked 
here's a mustache 
or two 
maybe three
cool there's dislestia in here nice
can't wait for the next chapter
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH MMMMMMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDD
LUUUNA YOU BAAAAAATCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CANT WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
For those that don't know, a vision of the future locks the event in place. So it actually is Luna's fault. Now an immortal has to die. It mat not be an alicorn or draconiquis though...
Just a hint.
4730934 Well done, I didn't know if anyone would pick up on that! you sir have earned a Eeyup!
4730914 Thank you! I promise it will come out very soon!
Hmm, something bad is coming down. An immortal will be slain, though which one is the question.
4730914 AGREED LUNA IS A BIATCH
Plot twist: The immortal slain will be Spike
Called it!