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Princess Cadence recieves a letter that tells of Shining Armor being in the hospital. Will she see her loved one again?

Big huge thank you to Lunar Avenger and Fedorasarecool for proofreading for me. Thanks again for your help guys. If you haven't checked them out, go check them out.

Also, a thank you goes out to WeepingAngel and the Editors-R-Us group. Thank you for your help on this project. If you haven't checked out the group yet and you're looking for a good proofreader for your work, go check them out. They do good work, they're honest and fair. So give them a chance. I'll put a link up for them. Other than that, enjoy.

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That was such a sad sweet story. I approve

Oh the FEELS :fluttercry:! Very touching story, I'm glad Shining was better in the end :pinkiesmile: I hope to see a sequel to this divine story mah Fran. Like and faced, :pinkiehappy:

3945384 I approve of your approval. :pinkiehappy:

3945789 I did think about going the other route, but I thought that we get enough stories where the characters die, so I thought, let's have a happy ending this time. :pinkiehappy:

The only thing that ever made me like this was Mr.Rogers. Actually, Mr.Rogers makes me super warm inside, but this made me very happy. Still, quite amazing that I'd compare anything that isn't my family to Mr.Rogers in terms of happiness. The man was a saint. The modern day Jesus. Amazing

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Anyway, great fic.

3951846 I'm glad it had that effect on you and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :pinkiehappy:

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Damn straight...
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You have seen Mr.Rogers Neighborhood, right?

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Oh yeah, almost forgot... FAVE MODE!!! ENGAGE!!!

3956612 A long time ago. When I was very young. He was very enjoyable. Did you know he did a crossover with Arthur? :pinkiehappy:

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WHAT!?!?!?
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Sorry.
Anyway, i must tell you a story about him.
Two guys (assholes) stole his car. He told the police, and sure enough, within 48 hours of his report, the car(with a full tank of gas) was returned with a note saying:
If we had known it was yours, we wouldn't have taken it.

3960966 Here's the link to the episode.

I did not hear about that. It's amazing the effect one person can have on so many lives.

Dayyum. Oh, did i tell you what he did after finding out about the thieves? He tracked them down then INVITED THEM TO DINNER.

3966713 Now that is a wonderful man
:pinkiehappy:

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HELLS YEAH! LET'S GIVE IT UP FOR...
MR.ROGERS!!!

3963414 And Arthur had Neil Gaiman too

My favorite writer was on Arthur :rainbowderp:............................. Bizarre, but epic :ajsmug:

3973470 Don't forget about Yo Yo Ma.

I don't think I've seen this episode before. Watching... Watching... Enjoying ... Enjoying... Is this sad?

3974973 Arthur is for everyone :ajsmug: Also we're both men, I assume, who enjoy a show aimed at little girls. There is no shame here

3975082 Educational shows FTW! :pinkiehappy: (And yes, I am a gentleman. Though I use that term loosely.)

Hmmm... a little over the top with the emotions, but it works.

Nice read. I think the over-the-topness worked considering what was happening and you maintined the feelings well. Plus, its nice to read some Shining Armour and Cadence, those stories are rather hard to find..

4077656 Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :pinkiehappy:

4077656 I wanted to make this story something special, because most of what I had been reading at the time was somepony dying. I wanted to step away from that, but at the same time, play with your expectations a bit.

4183305 Thank you for your words. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I've noticed that with Spike and Shining Armor. They usually get killed off simply for an emotional outburst. I wanted to hint that I might go that way and play with the audiences expectations a bit. :pinkiehappy:

It has to be so emotional? I love it it really made me burst into tears, And the good thing is he is alive! By he I obviously mean Shining :D

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