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I'm a brony. That's about it. Write when I'm bored or have a REALLY good idea that just won't leave me alone.

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Button Mash has always liked Sweetie Belle. She was fashionable, yet not afraid to get dirty. She was smart, but enjoyed to play video games with him. Sweetie Belle has had a crush on him since they first hung out. Both have been afraid to show their feelings, but on Hearts and Hooves Day, they decide to show each other what they truly mean to each other.

Cover image artist- http://medio-cre.deviantart.com/art/A-Girl-s-Best-Friend-425853916

*Edit: Wooooow. 100 likes in just the first day??? Are you serious? Thanks guys!

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Comments ( 148 )

D'aww! I love these two! :yay:

Nice :) You did something that I considered but didn't get round to panning down. I am just glad a story like this got out.

Feels very fragmented though, lacking detail or substance. Nothing a quick proofread or some editing won't fix. There were also some odd language decisions. New to writing, aren't you? Don't worry, so am I.

But I hate it when commentators act like snobbish proofreaders, spotting out mistakes or judging stories. Both of our stories — mine still a work in progress — are rather similar for their flaws and their strengths.

So... I was thinking, since it is hard to find decent proofreaders here (or I am lookign at the wrong places), why don't we help each other out? I can proofread future stories of yours. I'm just glad to see ideas get made, you know. Wish they reach their full potential. I really feel like you put in a lot of passion into this story, especially with the image. I mean, there is still so much missed potential in this.

Also, started since yesterday, didn't you? Missed Valentine's by just a mark. So... feel free to reply, I suppose.

This was great. It's nice to see more ButtonBelle on this site.

3949262 I'm not that new. I've been writing for about 2 years. This story wasn't supposed to be too hard on detail since i just wanted to write a nice sweet story for Hearts and Hooves Day (I finished it yesterday but it only got approved today.) This was a nice change to my current story that's going to be well over 100,000 words.

I'd be down to help proofread your stories. I'll get back to you when I'm done at work

Quite Cute, I'm assuming Rarity and Buttons Mum had went into the respective shops at some point earlier and paid most of the items off so it didnt look like much to Button and Sweetie

I was a little disappointed that there were so few ButtonxBelle fics this Valentine's Day, but at least we get this one.

Not a lot I can say about this other than: D'aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!:twilightsheepish:

This was a nice cute little one shot and I'm happy to have read it. Keep up the good work.

ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh I love it so cute.

From,
Penarch Waves

P.S. You should write more with these two

These two need to happen in canon. Seriously.

I love this shipping but Spike/Sweetie belle make more sense to me.

I mean have you seen the season 2 finale.

good story though

3950475 This ship and SpikexSweetie are my two favorite ships for SB. I plan on writing a Spike and Sweetie Belle fic at some point.

3950670 I look forward to it

I've had a bit of a skim over this and added it to my list of things to read later as it looks like a lovely little story.

One thing though! Please please please, speaking as an artist myself, source your title image! If you don't know where it's come from, a Google Image Search takes a mere few seconds.

In this case though: http://medio-cre.deviantart.com/art/A-Girl-s-Best-Friend-425853916 <-- there is the source. Please make sure to give the artist credit - and it wouldn't hurt to ask them if they mind your using the image; though given what I've read of it I can't see why they would.

Comment posted by MLPTMNTLPS-Moving deleted Feb 18th, 2014

Absolutely adorable. I'm proud to say that I read this along with my girlfriend, although I only now got the chance to comment on it. Extremely well written and structured, perfect length for a short story. Only a couple grammar flaws, but that's no big issue. All I can say is, overall, it was a cute story well worth my time reading. Solid 9/10, keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more from you :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

3952397 .....well shit....

Ten kinds of too cute!
These two are adorable and totally destined to be together.

Although if I HAD to critique, it ended way too quickly. You spent 4000 words setting this up and it's ended in like two paragraphs. Just a "and it all worked out. The end." And I was left kinda' wanting more.

3952520 I understand that. I really only did this as a way to relieve stress build up from my other story and I wanted it out for Valentines Day, so I let some things slide for this to make it out. I shouldn't have done that, but I didn't try too hard to make this story super duper amazing. It was more to be just a one shot one chapter cute story. I've been meaning to get around to doing a longer more in depth story with these two, but I've never gotten around to it

That was fucking adorable. Well done.

Hnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng.

That is all.

Also

Haylo is an awful name.

This story made my night. It was just adorable. I don't even know what else to say about it. So...yeah, adorable.

Nice. Well done.

d'awwww faved and upvoted. Beautiful story! :yay:

Hey, um, just wondering but; I have a list of stories I'd like to read on youtube and I was wondering if maybe you would allow me to add your story to the list.

It is hard to express how wonderful it is to find a good shipfic.
Thank You for deciding to write something romantic that contained nothing but love.
No spooning.
No sex.
Just love.:raritywink:

Nicely done. I was waiting for Rated Ponystar to do something like this as a followup to the Hearth's Warming Eve story.

3949348
Indeed.

3952573 Well do more! This pairing needs more love if you ask me! If I weren't already writting a Rumble/Scootaloo fic I'd do one for them!

Those I suppose a ship cameo is in order...

3954199
Sadly, everything that I came up with for this day seemed to be already done in cliche. I do have a sequel planned out though and will work on in the near future

As an aside ... 10 ponies (and counting, probably) died from Sweetie-betes.

Honestly, a touching and very nice story of two young people who are in love but just cannot find the way to admit it to each other or themselves. I know we've ALL had this moment in life.

Adorableness, thy name is Sweetiemash :twilightsmile:

There should be a chapter after they get married and it's on their first hearts and hooves day as a married couple. I would have a fangasm over that. :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

a real emerald is generaly worth more per karrat then a daimond, that jewler took quite a loss

well done man, well done!

3954263
Nice. Looking forward to it.

The pacing felt a bit rushed to me, but overall it wasn't bad. 7/10 :pinkiehappy:

This was awesome :D

Comment posted by Silv3r Shadow deleted Feb 16th, 2014

This was soooooooooooooooooooooooo cute!:yay: I loved it!:heart:

3954625 Rarity and Button's mom paid for it ahead of time so that he could get it. They were smart :raritywink: but all in all this was a really great short story and I loved it. I wish I could have made a story for Valentine's Day but I am studying at the moment so I had no time :fluttercry: I am glad to have found this story though :pinkiehappy:

:pinkiecrazy:ERROR: CUTENESS OVERLOAD:pinkiecrazy:

D'awww the feels! Take my like, favorite, and 'staches! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

The Cuteness...It's Fluffing my heart!:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh:

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