They came as conquerors...but they will leave as something new. Bonds will be formed in the occupied Crystal Empire, love will blossom, and secrets long-buried will be uncovered.
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It's alive!
Poor changelings, they stood no chance against Pinkie.
XD Welp, that's one restaurant they'll never be able to visit again.
Welcome to your all expenses paid guilt trip! I'm your pilot, Pinkie Pie!
Wow, what a scene they made. And it doesn't even occur to them it's because of them, not the ponies.
Though aww, they made Pinkie sad. AM curious about his ear, though...
Corrections offered without malice.
Double-spacing after a stop is bad practice caused by typewriters, I'm told.
This would seem to erroneously apply "mixed-gender" to individual patrons. "Parties" would be a better word.
tablecloths
whose
ramen
garçon
…though it's frightfully bad manners to call a waiter "boy" like that.
Why is "dug" here?
[quote“That’s okay,” she sighed, ears folding down. “We’re just your prisoners and nothing more, it’s not like you have to tell us.”
That ripped through the changelings’ defenses like a tear-soaked meteor through cardboard]pinky uses emotional attack it's super effective