They came as conquerors...but they will leave as something new. Bonds will be formed in the occupied Crystal Empire, love will blossom, and secrets long-buried will be uncovered.
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Excellent to see another long story by you! Liked and favorited, please don't let this become a dead story like so many others. Though seeing your track record I'm not exactly worried about that.
Christmas?
Poor Celestia, fearing for her sister like that. Well, time to read the next chapter!
Wait a minute. Dollars? Also, why the total rewrite? The original first chapter was good enough.
This is completely different from the original first chapter. I am not entirely sure if it is even the same story.
Still, you would think they would have learned by now that changelings are really good at shapeshifting. Which means that they could be anyone at almost anytime.
Guesss it takes a few clocks to tick it to 'em. I know, that was bad, and I feel a little bad for making that joke.
Whew, for a moment I thought he was going to get off about scott-free for wailing on a defenceless prisoner.
I know it's late, but it should probably be 'a couple of hooves taller', not feet.
Awesome opening chapter!