Tuggin' One Out

You've always been a fast runner but Equestria's fastest pegasus just might make the first move.

2nd Person Fic

Rated [Cheeky] as per the SFG Group guidelines.

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Slashe720

Slashe720 #1 · Mar 23rd, 2012 · · ·

i love the way you used porn to start the relationship.
goody story sir

Th4t Dark c0rner

Th4t Dark c0rner #2 · Mar 23rd, 2012 · · ·

TROLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL. What a strange situation. very well written. Unliek thhise coment.

Wind Whistler is love

Wind Whistler is love #3 · Mar 23rd, 2012 · 1 · ·

Really funny, especially how aggressive Dash is...

>>“Thanks Twilight, this is great! Can you check me out now?”
“I sure can...” Twilight mumbles.

Took me a minute, but this cracked me up.

Molotov Delivery

Molotov Delivery #4 · Mar 24th, 2012 · · ·

Nice story. Refreshing idea and a nice parody there of the rest of the cliché clopfic arcs most often used.

Crackshot

Crackshot #5 · Mar 27th, 2012 · · ·

Rofl, nice. Good story, great concept. Wonder how Twi will react when she finds out? I sense in "my" future.

Armada

Armada #6 · Mar 28th, 2012 · · ·

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I was so concerned that nobody would get that or that everyone would misinturpret it. Thanks for the ego boost.

Crackshot

Crackshot #7 · Mar 28th, 2012 · · ·

375953 No problem. Here's an idea, if you don't mind. Maybe a sequel or a bonus chapter about it? Or maybe a different story from the perspective of a different character who gets with Twilight that intersects with this story? I'm sure either would be great.

Armada

Armada #8 · Mar 28th, 2012 · · ·

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Well I always wrote this to be a one-shot. And the story doesen't intersect with any characters other than Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash.
I also didn't write it with the intention of what would be called: Pair the Spares. So as for Twilight getting with another character, I can neither confirm or deny that idea.
As for a bonus chapter, that would just be a clop scene or an omaki, neither of which I want to do.

-Brutus

-Brutus #9 · Apr 23rd, 2012 · · ·

Was fun read

Kody910

Kody910 #10 · Jun 14th, 2012 · · ·

At first I was like:
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And then I was like:
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Clever, clever! I liked this!

One nitpick though:
You ease back into your chair, your heartbeat settling down and you go to exit the porn when Dash puts her hand on your shoulder.

What is a hand?

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